You have such good style and imagery with the way you tie the weather and Marty's emotions together. The rain being taunting and violent and incessant vs the sun being reassuring and smiling, it's just *chef's kiss* lovely contrast and it really helps us get in tune with his emotions.
Doc's sense that something's off with Marty and his concerns for him are just so sweet.
I also loved the detail that Marty's been at Doc's garage so often that he has pajamas there; it just shows how close of friends they are.
oh my goodness, thank you so much! this comment truly made my day. i’m so happy that you enjoyed it, particularly the language and characterisation — i haven’t written many bttf fics (as of yet!) so it makes me really happy to hear that! thank you again :,)
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