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Ah yes the negotiator.I loved this chapter.The introduction was well done.The background was nicely explained.The backstory is solid and makes sense given all the circumstances involved.The dialogue seems spot-on.The interactions are pretty much amazing.The descriptions of reactions, thoughts and feelings are top-notch.I hope I helped with constructive feedbackOver and out
Ah yes the negotiator.
I loved this chapter.
The introduction was well done.
The background was nicely explained.
The backstory is solid and makes sense given all the circumstances involved.
The dialogue seems spot-on.
The interactions are pretty much amazing.
The descriptions of reactions, thoughts and feelings are top-notch.
I hope I helped with constructive feedbackOver and out
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