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1. KingLethal on Chapter 1 Mon 24 Jan 2022 04:15AM UTC

   

   Omg tell me something I don’t know! I swear writing in 1st person has killed me. The newer chapters are all in 3rd. I figured it out when I was writing “Walk a Mile” I was like “Wow that was easy and less straining for my head.” But yeah chapters 47? and up I think aren’t in 1st person.

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2. 1. Hgijklmuchitlll Jikoepqurtss (Guest) on Chapter 1 Mon 24 Jan 2022 06:38AM UTC

      I would bro but I can’t man, I’ve spent too long not reading first person that my brain will not let me. Bro cut your losses and do a rewrite Idk

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