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  1. lostway7 on Chapter 1 Sun 26 Dec 2021 05:12AM UTC

    Fucking hell I have so much to say and my mind is running so fucking fast and gOD I NEVER THOUGHT A SEOLBO BRAIN ROT COULD BE THIS FUN— okay let me calm down.

    I've been eyeing your works for a while now and I sure was excited just by the whole premise of this piece but nothing prepared me for what was waiting for me and I'm honest when I say I haven't had that much fun in a minute. To start off, the format in itself is really interesting: I love stories that don't follow the usual structure just like I admire who can pull that off well and you definitely did great with it (the messaging thing mixed with the narration is amazing, I'm perplexed). Juyeon and Sojung as your insufferable duo who you want to strangle and hug all at once is what I live for and them as fansites are relatable in worrying levels (yes I would cry too, Sojung, and yes, Dawon's legs are a spectacle on their own, Juyeon). As for Hyunjung... Girlie is a CHAOTIC MESS and I LOVE IT, though I think she's really strong since I would probably faint if miss Bona ever looked directly at me.

    Watching the whole catfishing thing untangle made me laugh hysterically. Hyunjung is slow as hell and the dumb and dumber duo can be just as oblivious, but still, thanks Sojung for everything (we lost another soldier, but who can judge her?). Also, it's worth noting that having the fan experience represented like this, so accurately and painfully real is both entertaining and insane. I'm even more self-conscious now than I would like to be but, well, falling in love is not a crime and life needs a bit of emotion.

    With that out of the way, let's talk about the idiots in love who have yet to realize they're in love.
    It's not always that I feel this struck by these two like this but this time around is different (if someone asks, I'll be in a seolbo lockdown until I get tired). I really hope they fix this little misunderstanding real quick, stop with the dancing around even quicker, and FUCKING KISS BECAUSE I'M ON MY LIMIT AUTHOR-NIM. They're way too cute for their own good and I bet Hyunjung will end up in the hospital after this meeting (or she'll die, or get angry, who knows); it would also be fun to hear a bit from Jiyeon's part about this situation/her feelings since it has passed a while inside their world and she knew damn well what she was doing.
    Hope nothing bad happens and hope even stronger that things end well. I want to see Hyunjung breaking down even harder when she realizes her crush isn't one-sided, I WANT TO SEE HER BREAK IN HALF AND I WANT TO LAUGH AT IT, and the same goes for Jiyeon (give me her blushing and being a mess too please, I'm on my knees).

    Now, before I exceed myself even more, let me tell you that your writing is amazing, really entertaining, and had me hooked before I could help it (I'll definitely check your other works later). Characterization? On point. Humor? Perfect. Pace? Unmatched. Fluff? Everything I can ask for (so give me more before I'm the one collapsing). For real, thanks for sharing and for your hard work, I had a great time reading and I can't wait for part two ❤

    Ps: love your prompts on twt, sometimes I cry inside while imagining them becoming full fics

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    1. qaisal on Chapter 1 Thu 06 Jan 2022 04:28PM UTC

      AAAAAA HELLO....FIRST OF ALL thank you so much for this comment it was such a joy to read and it made my day?? ;__; i've also been eyeing your works for a while and trying to get time to read them all bc they look so good so thank you this means a lot coming from an amazing writer like yourself!! T_T

      not to like comment on your comment but
      - i'm soso relieved that you thought the half-messaging half-narrative thing worked bc i was kind of worried it would be too messy and that people wouldn't like reading it in that format!
      - the catfishing was. so fun to write. oblivious hyunjung and jiyeon's subtle but glaring slip ups....i was having too much fun
      - "idiots in love" exactly
      - DANCING AROUND EACH OTHER IS SO FUN TO WRITE i'm sorry <3
      - it's still a work in progress but i hope chapter 2 meets all your expectations! reading this comment made me excited for my own writing lmaooo so thank you so much for the high praise seriously you are too kind!! ;-; thank YOU for taking the time to leave this lovely comment and thank you for reading <3

      also !!!!! omg what's your twt @ if you don't mind i would love to follow you back!! aaaa (but yes i hope to eventually get time to write at least most of those prompts!! wjsn deserve so many more fics and i am determined to fill the tag)

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      1. lostway7 on Chapter 1 Tue 18 Jan 2022 02:42AM UTC

        Oh man, I'm so sorry for this late reply. My ao3 notifications have been a mess these past few days and I only saw your reply today :((

        But yeah, I'm glad this humble little comment made you happy and excited and I truly wish you good luck, as well as I'm sending you positive hopes, while writing the second part (there's only this fic on my mind all the time, you've made quite the impact on me). I'm @taengeyez on twt, and that short eunbo au of yours? Yeah, I'll cut my procrastination and read it as soon as I can (and please, please, do write these prompts, they're perfect)

        Also, please take care and take your time to come back ❤️

        Ps: Don't you make me blush with those compliments of yours, I'm weak-hearted

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