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Your plot and descriptions are amazing!Grammatically, your sentences are all run-ons. You should probably try to make each sentence about half as long. Piling descriptors makes it harder to understand. Otherwise, your englsish is great for being a secondary language!!
Your plot and descriptions are amazing!
Grammatically, your sentences are all run-ons. You should probably try to make each sentence about half as long. Piling descriptors makes it harder to understand. Otherwise, your englsish is great for being a secondary language!!
Thanks! glad you like it so far, and I'm definitely using your advice
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