Comment on The World Building of Courting Culture Confusion

  1. KuraKura0_0 on Chapter 6 Tue 24 Nov 2020 04:02AM UTC

    Love how this crack fic came about to actually a really intriguing fic with really cool world building and humour too!

    One thing I did note that was a little odd though was the part where you've said that Butsuma may have wanted the run to be traumatizing so that the prey/runners can awaken their Sharingan....

    Butsuma is Hashi/Tobi's dad. It think you meant Taijima right? As I don't think your clan enemy would want you to get stronger which just makes you a harder enemy to defeat.

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    1. Phlebas on Chapter 6 Tue 24 Nov 2020 05:42AM UTC

      YES! Good catch and thank you!

      This was from a comment thread and I was thinking about Butsuma when I wrote it - and I got them mixed up.

      Mea culpa.

      I just corrected it.

      Thank you again for spotting it!

      (Also - I love your icon!)

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