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  1. IndigoMay on Chapter 10 Thu 20 Dec 2018 05:23PM UTC

    So I was rereading the draft again and this time I noticed the digs against Andrew Hartford and was like “soooo Overdrive did not go well” and it literally took me until this comment to remember that Tori was in the OaR crew. Oh dear.

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    1. SailorSol on Chapter 10 Thu 20 Dec 2018 05:29PM UTC

      Wagon Hill at Sunset

      That was one of the things we were going to change. The Canon team doesn't make sense. The plan was to have Carter as Red, TJ as Blue, Kira as Yellow, Kimberly as Pink, and... I can't remember who was Black/Green. But it still had interesting repercussions.

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      1. IndigoMay on Chapter 10 Thu 20 Dec 2018 07:12PM UTC

        Not Xander as Green? But that WOULD have been a cool team-up.

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        1. SailorSol on Chapter 10 Thu 20 Dec 2018 07:15PM UTC

          Wagon Hill at Sunset

          Oh, it was Xander! Thank you for reminding me.

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