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  1. Account Deleted on Chapter 3 Fri 23 Nov 2018 07:17PM UTC

    Oh my god!! The humour in this chapter is amazing. Naru you should know not to braid Phi's hair he would look way creepy in my opinion and Aiga being protective of Naru Yay!!!
    Aiga's account of Fubuki marring Shu is very weird but in this fic i guess it is accountable.
    "“I’ll be careful,” Aiga says automatically, though he had planned on saying something else." Do I see foreshadowing here.
    Poor Naru not having any clue on what is happening.
    Phi being kind to Naru is very suspicious. I have my eyes on you Phi.

    Good job Author looking forward for the next chapter. Good luck.

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