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    A fight with the Crystal Gems has left Peridot cracked within an inch of her life. Trapped on Earth, with no one and no way to get home, Peridot's all but given up hope. But she doesn't know the lengths Steven is willing to go to in order to keep her alive.

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  2. 17 Sep 2020

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  4. 26 Aug 2020

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  5. 07 Aug 2020

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  6. 27 Jun 2020

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    The plot was concluded satisfyingly and the characters, though not totally canon-compatible. were self-consistent.

    As for problems, many times I had trouble picturing the scene. Part of it was probably me being tired, but I also think the story could describe where characters are and what they are doing better. The story also had many small formatting errors and a few grammar errors that were distracting. My final problem was that I didn’t find the fusion in title (Tourmaline) believable until it was justified in a flashback near the end of the story. I could have engaged with the story more if that justification was given at the actual time of the fusion.

  7. 25 Jun 2020

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    C14

  8. 01 Jun 2020

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  9. 18 May 2020

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  10. 24 Apr 2020

    Rec

  11. 22 Apr 2020

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  12. 05 Apr 2020

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  13. 04 Apr 2020

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    Bom
    Terminei

  14. 30 Mar 2020

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    buckle up. it’s gonna be a bumpy ride.

  15. 22 Mar 2020

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  16. 10 Mar 2020

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  17. 09 Mar 2020

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  18. 03 Mar 2020

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  19. 02 Mar 2020

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    Left off midway ch 23

  20. 21 Feb 2020

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  21. 19 Feb 2020

    Rec

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