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A Mudblood, a Death Eater, and Voldemort walk into a bar.
It'd be a bad joke if things weren’t so miserable.Hermione and Draco find themselves in 1944 with fleeting memories, a teenage Dark Lord, and no clue as to how they ended up fifty years in the past.
Nothing makes sense.
But maybe it isn't supposed to.
They have worse things to return to, after all.[under construction prose-wise]
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- Part 2 of OM
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21/22/33 Terrible. A mite offensive at times. Far too aggressive. Reads more like a Wandavision fanfiction than a HP one. Very anachronistic. Writing style is good but hectic. Tried with all my might to get through it, but I had to stop here. I find Hermione to be an incredibly flat static character, Draco is a walking dystopian fanfic stereotype. If I wanted to re-read Illuminae, I would have done so. Find it very lazy that the author hasn't done research into the 40s, hasn't Britpicked the work. Leave it up to an American to include gun violence in anything. (This could have worked out really well, and it was introduced as an interesting premise, but it was very poorly executed.) Much of this story seems to be needlessly circular and repetitive. Freytag wouldn't know what to do with himself or his pyramid, with this one. I did like the diary entries and the aspect of Draco as an animagus, but too much is either not discussed or taken for granted/self-eplanatory. This has massive potential, but the plot seems to have petered out. Disappointed that it did not live up to its premise, nor the expectations that were created at the beginning of the story.
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WIP- "Occurrens Mentium" - Downloaded 12/11/23 update. Only 1 chapter left.
A Mudblood, a Death Eater, and Voldemort walk into a bar.
It'd be a bad joke if things weren’t so miserable.Hermione and Draco find themselves in 1944 with fleeting memories, a teenage Dark Lord, and no clue as to how they ended up fifty years in the past.
Nothing makes sense.
But maybe it isn't supposed to.
They have worse things to return to, after all.