I've been getting a lot of comments on this work, which wow, definitely made me realize maaayyybe I should have actually went back to edit. Y'all are throwing some seriously good points out here, and honestly, i should have been able to figure that stuff by myself, but again. I was really rushing through this, and it showed. So, for now, I'm gonna be taking this fic down, work on it a little more before putting it back up.
The problem is, I'm gonna be out of country for the most of next month, and I really don't want to deal with any big commitments, like. At all. So I'll try to work on it before I leave, but seeing as I don't wanna rush through this again, there's a chance this won't be back at least until around May.
Until then, thanks for the fast comments. :P Maybe I should post fics I know for sure I'm not done with so I can get more helpful input from y'all (jk, jk)