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    The first investigation was going exactly as the Mastermind hoped it would.

    And then Ouma picked up the ball.

    MAJOR V3 SPOILERS

    (Sort of Fix-It; Justice is Served AU)

    TV Tropes: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/ThreePointShot

    Reading by Net Neutrality: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLK2BZXDp6Lqhr9zimdHWTmQpu21y2cBaw

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    wow. this was quite the ride. I do really like long re-write fics but sometimes all of them do tend to blur in my mind haha. While I enjoyed this fic immensely I actually thought it was one of the weaker ones out there, but only because of some of the murders and the lesser focus on supporting characters that I felt deserved a spotlight such as Ryoma and even Himiko. I did in fact like that Himiko's development was done in Chapter 2, its always been something I've considered from V3, if the case 2 & 3 orders were switched around simply because Ryoma and Kirumi's deaths felt a little off considering the two of them didn't get as much time and were mostly solitary characters that didn't have loud personalities like the others as well as the fact that Tenko's men hating and Himiko's complete lethargicness actually started getting to me by chapter 3 and I just wanted it to stop, Angie was getting into dangerous territory along the same lines but after chapter 3 and learning why exactly she did what she did and thinking of the many possibilities that lead Angie's belief in Atua made up for it. I did really enjoy Ouma's plan and I went nuts when I remembered the hard drive he won earlier in the fic and I guessed the Kiibo reveal. Chapter 4 felt a bit off, i really really enjoyed the virtual world murder mystery game that went on there. It felt really fresh actually and it was pretty cool seeing everyone react to it differently, i think it might be my favourite motive I've seen in these re-writes so far. Glad Tsugumi wasn't the mastermind, an uncommon thing in V3 rewrites, at least from the completed ones i've read. Didn't miss he a single bit. Though the final trial felt a little bit off but honestly I can forgive that, its probably the hardest trial to encapsulate the atmosphere of as characters deal with the weight of the truth. All in all, amazingly written, thank you for making this.

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