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Monochrome to Color by Skyla_Schultz
Fandoms: Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rick Riordan, Percy Jackson and the Olympians & Related Fandoms - All Media Types, The Heroes of Olympus - Rick Riordan
14 Aug 2018
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"On a certain day in April,
I heard the song of an Angel"Will Solace was known as the Human Metronome. He played every note on his piano exactly the way the sheet music says.
Will Solace was 12 when he decided to leave the music world. The death of his father left him with a piano that he could no longer hear. Now it's been almost 3 years, and he's been living his life as a normal student. That included helping his friend Lou Ellen with playing matchmaker.
Will Solace is now 14 and he has just met Nico Di Angelo, a guy in his class who plays the violin. Someone who's personality is just as reckless and unpredictable as his music.
And maybe, just maybe, Nico can make Will's monochrome world finally erupt with color.
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A New Westeros by Cmyatt01
Fandoms: Game of Thrones (TV), A Song of Ice and Fire - George R. R. Martin, A Song of Ice and Fire & Related Fandoms
13 Aug 2018
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The Long Night has ended. Cersei is dead and the King's Landing is in shambles. So Jon and Daenerys return to Dragonstone to begin their reign as King and Queen of Westeros.
There will be lots of fluff and family and attempts at smut. Dragons and Direwolves as well!
Constructive criticism is welcome!!
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- Part 2 of A New Westeros
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You can step on my feet. by chipmunksmtw
Fandoms: BanG Dream! Girl's Band Party! (Video Game), BanG Dream! (Anime)
13 Aug 2018
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Misaki can't dance.
Kokoro can though, so she offered to teach Misaki, and what can Misaki do except accept?
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When tragedy strikes Fructum, siblings Cerise and Amet barely escape with their lives. In the midst of their escape, Cerise loses her brother. Now she must find a way to find the last living member of her family but is majorly set back by a crash landing on Earth.
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- English
- Words:
- 6,062
- Chapters:
- 5/?
- Hits:
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Being an incredibly advanced android prototype, Connor has super-enhanced senses that aid him in his job as a detective. Unfortunately, super-senses combined with curiosity is a terrible, terrible mix. He’s the world’s most powerful and efficient supercomputer, he shouldn't be distracted, confused, and frustrated, especially not by an barely even audible mystery noise. What is it? Why can't he identify it? Why is it that nobody else seemes to be able to hear it? Connor doesn't know, and that's a problem. And, after all, androids were created to fix problems.
Connor comes to terms with his deviancy and tries his best to understand his new emotions, and what it means to truly be human.
In the aftermath of the android revolution, it seems people are having accepting the fact that androids are alive and free now.
You’re just trying to live your life without having to worrying about racism or whether or not love has limits. And, you’re especially not trying to worry about a particularly wonderful android and the next time he’s going to ask you about singing. -
Five Poems Between Two People and One Reaction by Siha_Shepard
Fandoms: Mass Effect Trilogy
09 Aug 2018
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Five poems back and forth between Betty Shepard and her lover, Thane Krios, and how they respond.
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- Part 2 of Betty Shepard and Thane Krios
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- English
- Words:
- 350
- Chapters:
- 1/11
- Kudos:
- 2
- Hits:
- 39
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Your Eyes Shine Brighter Than The Stars by shit_happens_bitchachos7
Fandoms: Sanders Sides (Web Series)
09 Aug 2018
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Patton is assigned a new roommate, Roman, and he is excited to make a new friend. However, due to some traumatic things that happened a year before, his friends - Logan, Virgil, and Remy - are very protective of him and suspicious of Roman.
Roman, on the other hand, finds himself slowly adapting to this peculiar group, and slowly falling for Logan.
But what is going to happen when each of the men's pasts come back to haunt them? -
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They were never supposed to get along, but they will because they deserve it.
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In which Zuko and Azula work together instead of against in order to conquer their worst fears and help bring to the world what they've always wished for themselves. -
The Experiment by SomebodyisAnonymous
Fandoms: Transformers: Prime, Transformers - All Media Types
08 Aug 2018
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You had nothing else to do, no one to miss you, so you complied with you silent captor. You came to know him as Soundwave, a silent and ever watching presence. Yet he was also a guardian to you, protecting you from the other Decepticons, and even other humans.
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Monsters left the Underground over a year ago, but they still have no rights. You didn't understand why so many people hated them so much.
It's unfair and you will help them get the rights they deserve. Maybe the skeleton you meet at the store can help you with that. After that bigot let's him pay for his book of course.You are filled with DETERMINATION.
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Clarke is a 27 year old entrepreneur whose spent the last decade of her life working on establishing herself in the art community. Now that she's not only made a name for herself, but has also achieved her dream of opening her own art gallery, she finds herself severely lacking in the romance department while harbouring an aversion to dipping her toe into the world of dating.
Enter Bellamy Blake, long-time friend and manager of the bar The 100. While initially hesitant to accept Clarke's proposition, matters out of his own hands eventually prompt him to agree, and so begins a months-long tryst that eventually spirals and heads in a direction neither were prepared for.
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tl;dr - Clarke is a 27 year old virgin who wants Bellamy to teach her about romance with a hands-on approach, and he agrees. -
Wait...What The Hell's A Sailor Scout?! by Cinnamon256
Fandoms: South Park, Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon | Pretty Guardian Sailor Moon (Anime & Manga)
08 Aug 2018
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Kyle Broflovski
A ginger nerd who has a crush on his best friend, Stan, and hates Cartman. Oh, and he has a secret life as some alien who uses a kite to fight.
Sailor Moon
Some random school girl who was given magical powers and was told to save the world from aliens. Sounds totally legit, right?
Well...
What if the two worlds collided? What if Kyle was Sailor Moon herself? What if he and Stan were actually in a relationship?!
Nah, it'll never happen...right?
Well,
When you take South Park, Sailor Moon, some shipping/fan-service, and a crazy author; who knows what'll happen?
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Scrawled Across My Arm by Skyla_Schultz
Fandoms: Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rick Riordan, Percy Jackson and the Olympians & Related Fandoms - All Media Types, The Heroes of Olympus - Rick Riordan
07 Aug 2018
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This was not how Nico wanted to spend his Friday night. He just wanted to stay home and maybe watch movies with his best friend. He did not want to go to a high school party. But here he was. His stupid older cousin just had to drag him to one and leave him with the task to socialize.
So Nico does. And well, that ended really well. (Don't we all love sarcasm)Will hated his Chemistry teacher with a deep passion. That was probably what led to him yelling at her in the middle of class. Now he had to convince his principle to not expel him. That would definitely not look good. Turns out that isn't hard and instead he gets tasked with showing the new kid around. So they become friends...and whoa! Wait. We're soulmates?
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We Don't Stay For Long by basilee (stellar_astrophel)
Fandoms: Be More Chill - Iconis/Tracz, Be More Chill - Ned Vizinni
06 Aug 2018
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Jeremy has been housebound for the last three years due to his severe agoraphobia. Until, that is, he gets his hands on a Squip.
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It's the first year of University.
Evan and Zoe have not talked since senior year.
Zoe isn't sure whether thats a good thing or a bad thing.
She turns to online friends, unable to focus on real life because of constant thoughts of her brother and her broken family.
She has a hidden, guilty desire to reach out to Evan, who goes to the same university as her and has come out of his shell, and she hates herself for it and denies it as much as possible.
Little does she know that there is nothing that he wants more than to do the same.TreeBoy: Can it be us, Zoe?
TreeBoy: Can it be us and only us?
GalaxyGirl: maybe
GalaxyGirl: maybe it can.
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- Part 2 of Dear Evan Hansen Fics
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Dylan is a horny fuck, okay?
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- Part 2 of High School
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30 days to do 30 prompts I'm probably going to forget to do one at some point then panic buut here we go anyway.
Day 1: Getting lost somewhere
Day 2: Pet names
Day 3: Patching each other up
Day 4: Hospital visits
Day 5: Scar worship
Day 6: Making fun of one another
Day 7: A death of someone close
Day 8: Sleeping in
Day 9: Hugging
Day 10: Watching the other sleep
Day 11: Drawing each other
Day 12: Having a lazy day
Day 13: In a Fairytail
Day 14: Geeking out over something
Day 15: Teaching each other how to do something
Day 16: Needing each other
Day 17: Washing something
Day 18: One of them is sick
Day 19: Spoiling one another
Day 20: Shopping together
Day 21: Buying flowers for the other
Day 22: Competing
Day 23: Being old together
Day 24: Dealing with children
Day 25: Trying to seduce one another
Day 26: Interacting with family
Day 27: Moving in together
Day 28: Falling in love
Day 29: Doing chores
Day 30: Pillow talkRead the notes please
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Former Heroes (who quit too late) by anythingcanhappenchild
Fandoms: Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D. (TV), Marvel Cinematic Universe
05 Aug 2018
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“She’s a potential asset. And I’d prefer not having to arrest her as a potential threat to SHIELD.”
“You want us to babysit.” May responded. Coulson knew her well enough to know she was … less than enthused at the prospect.
“You two are two of my best agents. And I need this asset to be watched twenty-four-seven. May you can complete most, if not all, of your administrative work off-site, and you’ll be capable of acting in her defense if a situation arises. And Coulson you’ve had the most experience with managing difficult subjects.”
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When Daisy hacks into SHIELD to help them with a case, Coulson and May get charged with protecting the talented, but traumatized, teen.
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- Part 1 of The Kids Aren't Alright
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The Right Place for a Shadow by StrawFairy
Fandoms: Kuroko no Basuke | Kuroko's Basketball
04 Aug 2018
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Seirin won the Winter Cup in their first year, but could they win again in second year? If they can’t, what would happen with Tetsuya?
This fic is about Tetsuya's developement as a person, and it takes a dark rute, is not about basketball or romance.