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    Unlike certain someones, Connor will not leave his only friend to greive alone.

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    Lora's used to coming face-to-face with death on a pretty regular basis. That's life when the Thalmor are hunting you down, and have been for years. She's definitely not used to Skyrim, or anything in it. That includes the Thieves Guild. She wouldn't have joined them if she'd had better options, but she needs money and she needs to get it somewhere the Thalmor won't be able to find her. It's not like this is her first time doing something she'd rather not to evade them, anyway.

    Unfortunately for her, joining the Thieves Guild when she knows next to nothing about thievery is an accident waiting to happen.

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    81/?
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    Kynri Wyrmswood planned on visiting her mother’s grave... but as it tended to go with her plans, the universe always had a way of disrupting them.

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    2/?
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    Dear mid-90s Konami, you can’t just mention a character finally decided he’d be a vampire hunter because his lover got turned and then not use her as a boss at some point like that, what the heck.

    Or: Several hours' drive from Pisa, Italy, Eric Lecarde's past catches up to him... and she's not happy.

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    These two lovable, flawed, eccentric Khajiit will meet new and old friends, tackle new and old enemies, complete long and short quests, traverse the province of Skyrim, and reminisce about their time in Cyrodiil and Elsweyr... and maybe go back there some day... all in due time ;3 Our tale begins in the City of Stone, Markarth.

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    11/?
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    Comic canon: Clark can hear and identify Bruce's heartbeat from anywhere on Earth

    What if DCEU movieverse Clark heard Bruce's heartbeat before they've even met?

    What if, he thinks, it's not that seashell's echo is false. But that the shell exists to echo, to carry the sea around even where the sea doesn't exist.

    To carry a home for the echo that would live in the shell.

    (is he the shell, or the echo that seeks a home?)

    Main arc (PG13) is finished and posted.

    Catharsis (NC17) is mostly finished and is undergoing revisions.

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    10/15
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    "On a certain day in April,
    I heard the song of an Angel"

    Will Solace was known as the Human Metronome. He played every note on his piano exactly the way the sheet music says.

    Will Solace was 12 when he decided to leave the music world. The death of his father left him with a piano that he could no longer hear. Now it's been almost 3 years, and he's been living his life as a normal student. That included helping his friend Lou Ellen with playing matchmaker.

    Will Solace is now 14 and he has just met Nico Di Angelo, a guy in his class who plays the violin. Someone who's personality is just as reckless and unpredictable as his music.

    And maybe, just maybe, Nico can make Will's monochrome world finally erupt with color.

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    Chapters:
    6/?
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    6
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    He also doesn’t know that you learned to win fights in ways he’d never think of. That you avoided playground bullies by staring at them stone faced anytime they came close, until they were so bored with you they stopped coming to bother you. That you win against the nuns by never quite breaking the rules, and never being around when they learned how far you bent them. That you learned how teachers and nuns with so many kids to look after don’t remember your trouble making so long as you stay out of range until another kid kicks up a fuss.

    You learned to fight without ever letting the others know you were in the ring.

    He doesn’t understand how leaving gives you an opportunity to fight, to fix things, because you knew, even then, that the only person who would fix things for you was you.

    (Later you’ll decide the only person who plans to fix anything, anything important, is you, and you’ll hack your way into social justice before you’re old enough to vote.)

    So, he leaves, and tells you to think of what you’d like for dinner.

    He leaves, and you run before they even turn the corner.

    (He shouldn’t have been surprised.)

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    Basically a short poem on our favorite twins

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    Spocks thoughts on humans and their teeth.

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    It began with Ockako putting her foot down. If Tenya wasn't going to take care of himself, she was going to do it, dammit. Some misunderstandings ensue. Light angst and lots of fluff.

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    Chapters:
    5/5
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    5
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    After Adara's family was murdered, she had no other choice but leave Helgen behind. For more than a decade, she lived between the safe walls of the College of Winterhold, even though she always wanted to leave.

    There was always something special in her, something more... and the Companions noticed her strong spirit quickly too.

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    14/?
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    When Corypheus used the Orb to try and break open the Veil, his actions had wide reaching consequences. But while Thedas is scrambling to figure out how to seal the Breach, Dawn Wesson is trying to figure out how a modern girl from Earth got dragged into Thedas and thrust into the middle of events that will shape the future of this new world. Dawn bears the burden of knowing what is to come and has to decide just what has to stay the same and what absolutely has to change. But this world is not the narrow confines of the game she remembers, and when things are vastly different from what she knows, Dawn has to play it by ear, only this time there are no save files or restarts.

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    Chapters:
    55/?
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    32
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    Your parents had helped in creating this world - your mother paid for it in death, your father in unknown areas, and you on the brink of death. A cave is your only hiding place but for so long. They were gaining on you, on every side of the mountain and you had no escape. Or, at least until you fell down a hole you didn't even realize was there.

    Now, you had to deal with monsters and...skeletons? You had no idea skeletons could live outside skin but you were proven wrong. You were also proven that you were sensitive to every touch. Who wouldn't be? After three years of no human or any contact - you've been touch-starved and need something.

    Damn, this story goes in so many directions and none of them exactly match. SO - "sans"itive human that craves physical contact, zombie apocalypse that doesn't reach underground, monsters, Sans, Papyrus, MORE SANS, MORE PAPYRUS, stop me.

    Constructive criticism appreciated and I would love to have some ideas from you guys too!! Please.

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    1876: An Empire on the edge of collapse. A desperate mission to save it will bring together two very different people from two very different worlds.

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    When his Girlfriend makes a suprising announcment, Enoch Cipher-Pines get pulled into a totally new adventure, thankfully, his family is there to support him no matter what.

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    Jyn Erso and Cassian Andor are one of the top ice dance teams in the world. Heading into an Olympic season, they’re the clear favorites to win. A gold medal is theirs to lose.

    The last thing they want is to jeopardize the Olympic dream they’ve worked so hard for by falling in love with each other.

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    4/?
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    9
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    Dipper and Mabel Pines have returned to Gravity Falls seven years after the events of Weirdmagedon. They are both ready to spend one last summer in the Mystery Shack until going to Gravity Falls University. But, all of this changes when Mabel accidentally releases Bill, giving him a new body. Instantly Bill devises a plan and kidnaps her, but what happens when the plan changes? She never meant to start liking him and he surely never ever wanted the issues that come with being somewhat human.

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    Chapters:
    14/?
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    14
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    4827
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    You didn't even know this kid and yet there they were, trying to end your life.

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    11/?
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    35
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    107
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    13
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    Adeline Cipher-Pines is a half-demon. After recieving a strange birthday present that is supposed to help her with her magic, she finds herself in a completely different world.

    My take on the next generation. this story will be from Adeline's point of view, the next from Enoch's and the Comet's and so on.

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