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  1. Fuzzy Cthulhu

    I'm pouring my love on chapter 1 because I imagine most readers will leave their lauds on chapter 2.

    I love poor Margaret here. Even though it's pretty much a redshirt death, I still really felt it. Here she is, daughter of John's army buddy, young and excited to be traveling, getting a cool opportunity to stay in a friend's flat in London, somebody I can effortlessly identify with (and kind of wish to be because honestly, free digs in London for a month? At 221B?!)...and BANG. All gone, just like that. It really feels viscerally horrific and tragic.

    And you did such a beautiful job of communicating John's shock. There's a hollow feel to his thoughts after that point, like he's not quite all there.

    Airy is right, though. How DID you make those legs look like Sherlock's?

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      Oh, you're the sweetest.

      And you know those legs are Sherlock's because they're like six feet long, all on their own. (and you know he's wearing completely inappropriate shoes for a B&E, haha.)

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