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Interesting beginning! I'm intrigued by the rigged tennis match and how that might have affected Light's character maybe. Nice to see Light's proficiency with computers picked up on too, and I enjoyed the interaction with Mello and Near on the phone at the end - that was a neat way of establishing their dynamics with each other and L, and establish their respective contrasting characters. :O Well, I'm certainly interested to see how this progresses! Good luck.
Thank you so much! :-)