Comment on A Lethality of Lazari

  1. Thank you so much, anon! This is lovely and biting and feels very true to canon. The title is such a good one! It's so clever and indicative of the work at large and it made me grin very wide.

    I really love the way you've balanced all the Lazari and their interactions with Forever! They all feel very real - each of them with specific boundaries and balancing-acts to follow based not only on their individualities, but of course their loyalties and those of their Family. Forever was a really great narrator and I really loved your take on her - she's cautious, but also kind and curious and very young. Her interactions with Joacquim and Sonja were so, so lovely, but I particularly enjoyed the way you built up the other Lazari and gave them depth and reality.

    Thank you so, so much, and happy Yuletide!

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    1. Oracle

      I'm so glad you liked it! As soon as I saw your letter, I knew I wanted to write this fic. I love the hell out of this book, but issue 13 blew me away. And Eve is a constant surprise and delight, walking that balance between being 19 years old, having the weight of her Family on her shoulders, and not incidentally being a built-from-the-ground-up killing machine.

      I adored all of the other Lazari and I'm hoping we get to see more of them in the issues ahead.

      Your response made my Yuletide. :) Thank you!

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