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  1. Good story line really interestig ♡♡
    Can i give yu a tip about the dialogue?
    You can use quotation marks like these " " to separate what they are saying from the rest, it makes it a lot easier to read :)))

    Good luck in the future with your fic will keep an eye out for it!

    Last Edited Wed 02 Sep 2015 04:53PM EDT

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    1. Thanks for the advise, I really appreciate it. Oh and thanks for the compliment :)))

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