i keep on reading this and trying to leave a comment and getting distracted before i can. anyway. usually i don't engage in romance fics but this is prime jeangst with happy ending. very nice. very choice 10/10. your writing style is so genuine and vivid and makes me happy. please make more.
what else was i going to say... . the pacing is really nice which is something i personally struggle with. it goes just fast enough for my brain to go like oh yes i am paying attention
Oh wow, thank you so much for the comment!! I really enjoy your work so I'm screaming just a little bit right now.
And thanks for your kind words about the pacing! I have the most fun writing (and reading) oneshot stuff like this because my ADHD brain likes for the words to go fast and be done sooner.
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