tip: lex m/m (mature OR explicit)
Honestly I wouldn't had been able to tell this is your first time writing a fic if ya didn't say so. You've got a real interesting premise here and a writing style that draws people in so definitely interested and excited to see where this goes next
Aww thank you that's so sweet! Thank you very much for your kind words, I can only hope the rest of the story won't disappoint!