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  1. So much I love about this chapter, long comment ahoy:

    1. The Akihiko-Shinji Mom-but-cusses-relationship. Golden.

    2. Fuuka being techni-progressive when neurotic. As a techie myself who's very prone to doing the EXACT same things Shinji said Fuuka did, I am pleased.

    3. "Boys' Buffet". I am S E N T.

    4. Rise, Kanji, and Chie being fam. <3

    5. Indirect kiss? Ohshc come straight to mind.
    5b. "[...]a look Naoto had seen numerous time with members on the police force deciding on the wisdom of telling a bawdy joke." Love this little bit. Also, is the joke about Mono? I could easily be wrong but I immediately thought that

    6. Naoto is starting to show a familiarity with Akihiko's friends. Like, they're so accepting and genuinely glad to have her. Fuck, I like reading too deeply into things and you bet your ass I thought of how Naoto, who's like the loneliest orphan homeboi, finally feels like she's liked by people without them being forced to care because of prior circumstances (such as saving the world together, she might feel like that's a burden more than a reason to be friends, even tho she cares dearly for them ).

    Anywayss my super rant done (hope my comment didn't go through twice). Absolutely lovely

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    1. THANK YOU!

      1. They swear because they care.
      2. I wish I was that productive, TBH, generally I just clean like a mad person.
      3. Best way to enjoy any fair/festival food!
      4. ALWAYS
      5. A good trope! No specific reference in my mind at the time, just a good avenue to get her to think about more physical implications of a relationship.
      5b. Now, Naoto herself had no idea what the account joke was... however I just thought it was around how Mitsuru herself would be compelled to do the examination xD
      6. TOTES WAS MY INTENTION! There's just something so profound of being accepted by a group of people because one of the members was like "I pick this one" and everyone else is like "Okay, you're one of us now, so good luck."

      Again, so glad you enjoyed it!

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