tip: "uchiha sasuke/uzumaki naruto" angst kudos>10
Really enjoying this story so far! Your depiction of the early days of Peter & Tony's closer relationship so far feels real to the characters (esp. Tony) and well-paced so far. (:
Thanks. you know it's funny, I thought that the amount of characterization nitpicking was too much, but like eight people have mentioned it's really good, so now I feel like it was less of a waste of time.