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  1. Well hello there

    Holy shit this was a delight, thank you. I laughed out loud and couldn't stop giggling at:

    “Ohhhh fuck, are you kidding me,” Patrick exhales, breathing hard through gritted teeth and dropping his forehead to rest on David’s shoulder.

    “What? Are you ok?” David stills and asks in alarm.

    “That’s what you feel like? David I’m gonna fucking die,”

    Everything (and that line in particular) was so hot and sweet and felt so in-character to me. More please!

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    1. haha thank you! they are so very fun to write. I hope I get them both right.

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