Comment on Losing our minds, bit by bit

  1. (Reposting my Reddit comment)

    I'm fandom blind to Voltron, but this was a super interesting setup. I'm getting a great sense of the space and creepy atmosphere that's filling the air. I can feel the tension rising with each line, and that's hard to nail down just right.

    Just the description of the darkness and how it practically bleeds into the rest of the room and around him is great on its own. Awesome excerpt!

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    1. Thank you! :)

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