Comment on Losing our minds, bit by bit

  1. Oh my god, I love this so much. What you've done with Keith and Lance is really interesting.And that ending! Wow, so freaking cool, I'm losing my mind, I'm so into this story.

    But can I give you a teensy bit of advice tho? If not, just ignore the next sentence. I've got real bad adhd so it might just be me but reading the story description was a bit confusing for me. I think it's cause it's just one huge block of text without any gaps. You might want to separate the paragraphs.

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    1. Thank you so much, your comment made my day! :) I am honestly really surprised that someone enjoys my story so much, and I appreciate it a lot.

      Also, thanks a lot for the feedback. I've had problems with formatting before, and I was so glad when someone pointed it out to me. Constructive criticism is always welcome ;)

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