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  1. Aww, the slow burn. We know what is coming - and I really like how you very slowly and with lots of details describe their way towards each other. There are so many little things, like looks, movements, that you are giving them and that feel very real and well-paced. Can't wait for the next update!

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    1. Slow burn can be so frustrating, yet, so satisfying at the same time!

      In their fast-paced London life, it is easier for them to ignore something that is staring them in the face. However, when life slows and their guard is down, that's when certain things come to light. That is what I was hoping to capture here in this chapter.

      I am so happy that you are enjoying this story! I will be posting the next chapter soon!

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