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  1. I absolutely love love LOVE this story. I think my favorite aspect of it is how you deal with the 'Little Sister' counterparts of the girls--you never make it seem like they're completely, 100% done with their experiences in Rapture. And the fact that they all have different personalities?? Unf!
    This also just has such lovely writing, and Jack is characterized so well, and the girls are adorable. Thank you for this, dear author!

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    1. Thank you so much! I've always imagined those experiences in Rapture sticks with you, like a piece of yourself you can never get rid of. And writing the different personalities for the girls was honestly the most fun part of the drafting process. The uniformity you see with the girls in-game is something I really wanted to explore so I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

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