Comment on Nutcracker: The Education of Little Miss Rey

  1. MFA101

    I also need to do a lot of research before I can post anything. Wikipedia is one of my best friends.
    I don't know if anyone notices yet, but I mention nightly "accidents" which is a disturbing sign for an adolescent who is still wetting her bed even when she is living in seemingly comfort. She probably has PTSD but Leia doesn't take her to see a therapist. Ben will somehow smell it like a bloodhound that he is and evil shit will happen soon.

    Last Edited Wed 19 Dec 2018 02:29AM EST

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    1. Which was my first thought. Shit! Don’t tell me he’s gonna become a serial killer too and go after her tormentors!

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      1. MFA101

        Now now now, your thought is scaring me instead. What a plot twist! No, Ben is a terrorist killer, not a series killer, yet.

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        1. Lol! I have a tendency to get excited and play Sherlock to try and guess the end. More often than not, I’m off.

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          1. MFA101

            I said before that I don't/cant write slowburn, so Ben's biggest problem here is that he will not wait until Rey grows older.
            Remember Rey has ice cream after the performance and the sugar high prompts her to drowsiness. It will come back to bite her in the ass.

            What we learn from the story:
            Use the toilet and brush your teeth before you go to sleep, children.

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            1. Me neither. After TLJ, I have trouble reading/writing slow burns. You know why.

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              1. MFA101

                LOL, mostly just because my brain doesn't have the capacity to let them pine for each other without actually doing anything.
                And speaking of pine, do you know the Forest Scene in the Nutcracker is a pine forest, and the nutcracker is made of pine wood?
                No, that's not the point, the point is, why do I keep using the key word wood.
                Because Ben's morning wood can grow big like the nutcracker.
                And also because, if Ben doesn't want to get Rey pregnant, or to give Rey a more thorough sexual education, he may use the nutcracker as a dildo.
                Why else did I stress the "long wood" thing again and again.
                That's it, I probably ruin a lot of people's childhood fantasy.
                You will never see nutcrackers the same way again.

                Last Edited Wed 19 Dec 2018 08:39AM EST

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                1. I haven’t seen the Nutcracker in such a long time, I hardly remember it. I don’t mind if they pine but not overdo it.

                  That’s going to be... uncomfortable. I’ve heard of strange dildos before, but I think that one will give people nightmares. Oh, and splinters.

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                  1. MFA101

                    Yeah, it will be very uncomfortable, so I am still debating whether to use the plot "device" or not.
                    In the first chapter Rey sees Ben as a perfect gentleman, and I intend to keep it that way. So he will introduce her to carnal pleasure gradually.
                    Poor little girl is delusional or idolizing her big brother even when he is doing unspeakable things.
                    The scariest predators are those who seem really nice. If Ben shows his true color too soon, it will probably end in two chapters, but I am planning a four-chapter story or three chapters with an epilogue.

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                    1. Exactly! What’s the saying? The devil is a gentleman? Meanwhile, he’s not going to appear as some grotesque monster but handsome and polite.

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                      1. MFA101

                        And also, "the devil is in the details".

                        There is a reason I mention the Organa-Skywalker twins but I don't let Luke comes out to play Drosselmeir - the godfather role - and give Rey (Clara) the nutcracker.

                        In many versions, the Nutcracker/Prince is the nephew of the godfather, and to be honest, it is still creepy when you think the godfather goes to Clara's room after she falls asleep so that he can fix the toy. He can also do some nasty things when she falls asleep. For all we know, he may be a predator or the mastermind behind the mouse riot.

                        So I let Ben plays both roles. Ben does everything right in front of his parents, in my mind, he is practically saying:
                        "Hello, I am going to marry you, little sis, here is part of your dowry. You don't like it? It doesn't matter. Oh hi, mom, thank you for bringing up my pretty little bride. And dad, sod off, I am the MAN in the house, hehe."

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                        1. Oh, wow! That’s right. It’s creepy enough with just Ben alone. And then to add “Uncle” Luke? *shudders*

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                          1. MFA101

                            I have debated about how to place Organa-Skywalker twins and sibling love, and I have them taken out a large chunk of photos from the family album and torn some pictures apart. Because there are missing pieces in the Organa-Skywalker family that Rey cannot find out.

                            And I intentionally make Han "aloof" because the story is too complicate as it is, I don't want another old man to show up as a creepy predator. Han may be the only decent guy in the story, though his shipping company is also doing some smuggling.

                            Why do I torment myself like this, I can just write some easy PWP, but instead, I have to plot so many things. Facepalm.

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                            1. Haha! Right? No simple PWP for you! You have to make it complicated with all kinds of layers. Lol! I challenge you, if you accept, to write some plain old boring Reylo smut.

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                              1. MFA101

                                "Not bad at all" is plain old Reylo smut..... not, it's not, it's Breylo.
                                Now that I think about it, I really haven't written any normal Reylo smut.
                                They are either dub-con, non-con rape, threesome, unspecified gender identity, and non-penetrative.
                                OMG, what is wrong with me?

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                                1. Nothing at all! You have something for everyone, even picky girls like me ;)

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                                  1. MFA101

                                    Nice to know that LOL.

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