Comment on Nutcracker: The Education of Little Miss Rey

  1. Get this demented shit out of the reylo tag, this is utterly disgusting and frankly I’m tired of seeing you sick freaks get off on something so horrendous.

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    1. MFA101

      Shrug. You have consciously clicked on a rape fic that is explicitly tagged and you still chose to go on and post such a comment.

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      1. When I see a fic romanticizing incest and pedophilia then I’m gonna comment. Real people go through and deal with these horrendous crimes and you sit here and write about it for sexual gratification. It’s horrible disgusting and I hope you know that promoting and romanticizing pedophile is actually one of the most vile things you could do. I hope you take a good long look at your life and your choices and I pray to god you don’t have access to children.

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        1. MFA101

          Do I romanticize incest? No, Rey is adopted, they are not related.
          If you are really upset, go shout at George Lucas who made the Skywalker twins kiss.
          Do I romanticize pedophila? No, I tag explicitly and give sufficient warning right from the start, instead of pretending that this is a fluffy sweet piece, I have Han cautioned Rey the moment something fishy happened on the stage.
          I write it from a girl’s point of view and describe what happens in the ballet. I will not justify what Ben is going to do later but that’s none of your business even if your are going to be a SJW but still secretly read RAPE fantasy and kink-shame what other people do on this site for a piece of trash writing.

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          1. Hey, don’t waste your time, friend. Just hit “delete.” If people are that obtuse that they can’t grasp “DON’T LIKE, DON’T READ” then they have no place reading fanfic. This is a work of fiction, like any rated film or book, that explores dark themes in a safe, appropriate place. Remember, you control the comments.

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            1. MFA101

              Thank you for the support. I wanted to give them a "Thank u, next" like Ariana but I didn't want to come off as too rude, so I try to give an explanation.
              This is not the worst comment I have ever seen. I have known from the start that I will face criticism the moment I post a rape fantasy.
              The stories themselves are meant to be disturbing.
              Just in the case of any sexual violence, rape and child grooming happens more often among family members and close family friends/teachers/priests than strangers. If anyone with kids are reading, I hope you learn something and pay more close attention to your babies.

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              1. Be just as rude back. It’s okay, lol! That’s the whole point of fairytales. Before Disney sanitized them, they were meant for adults, not children, and filled with dark, twisted stuff so that we could learn something from them.

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                1. MFA101

                  Thank you so much. You are a real angel!

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                  1. <3 <3 <3

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                    1. MFA101

                      The way we are talking to each other in this thread is a means to just to piss off the original poster, LOL.

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                      1. LMAO! In that case — {(HUGS)}

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                        1. MFA101

                          Imagine the flurry of email notices they'd get if they dared put their true email address when they commented anonymously.

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                          1. *Matt the Radar Technichian voice* Exactly, exactly!

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                            1. MFA101

                              Did you know that I have intended to write "Goldilocks" featuring our blonde Matt the Radar Technician?
                              Somehow I used the Goldilocks and the Three Bears elements in the Nutcracker.
                              But some day, I will write Goldilocks!Matt's adventure on the Star Killer base when he encounters three "bears" of First Order.

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                              1. That’s going to be hilarious! Can’t wait!

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                                1. MFA101

                                  I have written and read so many stories about Rey being raped, so I want to turn the table, what if the one being raped is the man, because reveres rape stories are rare in heterosexual ships (but common in slash ships). I know it will probably be very unpopular, but I want to have a try anyway.

                                  So reverse role play, Kira Rey rapes Matt who is the undercover agent of the resistance.
                                  Can you hear my evil snickers echoing in the spaceship's chamber? You can't. LOL.

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                                  1. Oh, it’s gonna be a darkfic? I thought a comedy. I think the only male/rape stories are Kylux, but I don’t read any of those. I’m a monoshipper, only Reylo, but fluffy smutty Reylo. It definitely will be different.

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                                    1. MFA101

                                      If I use a fairy-tale as the title, it will be a dark fic, because that is the theme of my "Reylo Rapey Reveries" and also because I like alliteration.
                                      I am not very invested in Matt as a stand-alone character unless he is an undercover boss or agent, which means he is still Kylo Ren or Ben Solo.
                                      I have thought about writing Goldilocks as a truly dark fic, that is Rey gets gang banged by Ben, Kylo and Matt, a foursome.

                                      But if I write a reverse rape, I can end the story with a plot twist for the faint of heart, that's what I do in Rey Riding Hood (if you haven't read it, I won't spoil you).

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                                      1. Ah, that’s right! I forgot. Well, he certainly fits the role as Goldilocks. But is he a real blonde? Lol! What if it’s really Ben/Kylo in disguise who was snooping around when he got caught by Kira Rey when it goes down?

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                                        1. MFA101

                                          What if it’s really Ben/Kylo in disguise who was snooping around when he got caught by Kira Rey when it goes down?
                                          In this case, I assume Kira Rey is the dark female counterpart of Kylo Ren, while Ben Solo is doing undercover for the Resistance.
                                          If Dark!Rey is the powerful force user in this scenario, Ben will be fucked literally.
                                          He will be milked out by Rey and probably get pegged. Because there are too few pegging stories in Reylo.
                                          If force sensitive Ben somehow overpowers Dark!Rey, I don't see Light!Ben as someone who will rape a woman to get information, but Dark!Rey will probably change her strategy and try to seduce him to the dark side.
                                          I don't want to write gender stereotype, but people seem to look past a few things when it is the woman who take initiate in sex, and that's probably how I get away with Alderaan. It is still creepy when you think an underage girl gives a grownup man a foot job/hand job.

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                                          1. ”In this case, I assume Kira Rey is the dark female counterpart of Kylo Ren, while Ben Solo is doing undercover for the Resistance. If Dark!Rey is the powerful force user in this scenario, Ben will be fucked literally. He will be milked out by Rey and probably get pegged. Because there are too few pegging stories in Reylo.”

                                            Omg!! That would be a crazy twist! She’s gonna drain his balls! True, there is not enough pegging in fic.

                                            I think because, in heterosexuals situations, rape is not about sex but power, if the woman initiated then it’s considered consensual. Of course, the man has to be receptive. BUT then you have an underage girl initiating then it becomes statutory rape. “Statutory” means “consented,” so it’s consented rape. The man is supposed to be the adult and make the right decision. But also take into account each situation is different. If we are talking about medieval period piece where people died early and married younger, it’s just accepted — not saying it was ok, but just a fact of life or history. The one rape scene of a man I saw in a movie that was truly disturbing was with Keanu Reeves in “Knock Knock” where he is bound to the bed and raped by two young female intruders and videotaped so they can blackmail him and send it to his wife. It completely turned the male fantasy of a threesome on its head because it’s expected that a man is supposed to “enjoy” it. But no. You can see that he was tempted, wrestling with the guilt, but ultimately fighting it because he loved his wife and this was going to ruin his life and family.

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                                            1. MFA101

                                              Before I write the incest story, I have checked America's statutory law, including the Romeo and Julie clauses - if the adult is, for instance, less than three years older than the minor, no crime has been committed or the penalty is far less severe.

                                              But the thing is, Ben is always ten years older than Rey as in my story, and even if they are within the three-year gap, they are in an adopted siblings, so it really doesn't count.

                                              Interestingly, if they are blood cousins (for example, if Rey is the daughter of Luke), they can actually get married and have biological children once Rey is over 17 in some states of US (for example, NY). That really opens my eye, because it is forbidden in my country to do so.

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                                              1. Yes, you’re right. If it’s within three years age difference it’s considered a relationship. The blood cousins marrying is/was more common in the Southern states, but still frowned upon anywhere even if distantly related. It’s become a sort of crude joke, stereotype, especially if there are a lot of genetic problems apparent in the offspring.

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                                                1. MFA101

                                                  Yeah, genetic problems in the offspring is the main reason cousin marriage is frown upon, so that's why Ben resists very hard in the beginning of Alderaan, because he doesn't want a two-dick baby (shamelessly insert my double dick Ben Solo series here).

                                                  In the past, when I was a slash fangirl, sibling incest story is common in certain fandom (Supernature), because they cannot produce children anyway. But then comes the ABO trope, and male pregnancy is all the rage.

                                                  And somehow ABO rages through Reylo fandom, and many fangirls are crazy about that. To me, if a biological trait reduces humans to basic animals, how do a society evolve or function properly.
                                                  For example, you have to leave from school/work because you are in heat/rut, it will create a lot of problems for your company/school, what about national security?
                                                  Are betas the backbones of our infrastructure?
                                                  I guess everyone in reality is beta in that way.
                                                  That's the reason I haven't dabbed in ABO Reylo, even though I know it will certain gain more popularity. I will stick to my dark fic and little foot fetish niche for the time being.

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                                                  1. The “two dicks” joke had me howling! But then he finds out they’re unrelated by blood, so it’s “okay.” Lol.

                                                    In ABO Reylo, there is no male pregnancy — at least I haven’t read any — the rules of human biology still apply except it’s on steroids with werewolf-like traits, so to speak, in males who present as Alphas and females as Omegas. (There are male Omegas and female Alphas but to me that’s just too confusing.) It’s a hangover from the ancestors and because those born with it have no control, it’s considered a medical condition and laws have been put in place to allow heat/rut leave from work and school. Though, alphas and omegas still face a lot of social prejudice from betas.

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                                                    1. MFA101

                                                      But then he finds out they’re unrelated by blood, so it’s “okay.” Lol.
                                                      And the moment he sees Rey's holo-picture, he is two steps away from flying in his Silencer to Naboo to propose to her. That's literally love at first sight.
                                                      But our Benny Boy in TFA freezes and kidnaps Rey after meeting her for like five minutes, so I think everything Ben does in my fanfics to pursue Rey is justified. LOL

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                                                      1. That’s exactly what he does in canon! And that’s what makes it so hilarious and sweet.

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                                                        1. MFA101

                                                          So I added a line in the Nutcracker, the main reason Ben came home for the holiday is because Leia has pulled some strings through the intergovernmental networks, and somehow it makes the story even scarier.
                                                          So Ben knew what Rey looks like and her love of ballet, but he has only sent them ONE postcard and bought her a gift, quite normal.
                                                          But then he saw Rey in person and intentionally explained the meaning of the nutcracker in a way that is really inappropriate to a susceptible girl. And he does all this in front of his parents who do not notice a thing.
                                                          Consider he is going to do the unspeakable things, and when Leia and Han eventually find out, shit will really hit the fan. Who is to blame?
                                                          Again, I may be plotting too much for my own good.

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                                                          1. Oh, wow. She has no idea what she has done. But Leia in the beginning was never innocent, correct? She just adopted Rey to help her political career?

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                                                            1. MFA101

                                                              Yes, in a way, Rey helped her successful political career. And when things go down, she cannot let the incest scandal out because it will hurt her reputation, it will be a skeleton in the closet.

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                                                              1. Damn! I think Leia has a few skeletons in that closet, lol!

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                                                                1. MFA101

                                                                  Yes, because when I said "heartbreaking loss", I didn't exactly mean Ben leaving for the middle east.
                                                                  There are quite a lot of skeletons in the Skywalker-Organ house, it seems.

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    2. Don't like, don't read. You're the one that clicked the link. You do no one any favors by spewing hate and vitriol. As someone who was targeted by a pedophile and had loved ones sexually assaulted (even one that committed suicide after having been assaulted), I see no harm in writing or reading about pedophilia, rape, or incest as it is ENTERTAINMENT. It can be a little therapeutic, if only slightly. The point, however, is that the writers on this site and any other has the right to share their creations. So long as they add tags and give sufficient warning, I see no problem with them writing about controversial subjects.

      On that note, please do the world a favor and refrain from birthing and/or raising children into narrow-minded, bible-banging, self-righteous twats like yourself. There is enough in the world already and none of us want anymore. :3

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      1. MFA101

        That's one of the most touching things I have ever received on this site. Thank you very much.
        I'm sorry what happened to you before and I hope you are better now and will enjoy an even better future.
        Yes, reading and writing about our traumas is therapeutic, it's got scientific proof.
        I won't divulge what happened to my youth but I am on your side, sister/brother, and will raise my children with an open-mind.

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      2. {(HUGS)} Thank you for sharing your story, SPN. It seems we have all experienced trauma in different ways, which it’d be ridiculous to assume just because readers read a story about rape or pedophilia that they must like that in real life. The fuck? That’s like saying Tarantino fans or Stephen King fans or any horror fan in general supports violence and is sick. It’s entertainment, that’s it. And, like you mentioned, it’s a form of therapy for the writers writing about this subject matter who are survivors themselves. I wonder if these people harass the filmmakers and actors with angry letters after seeing a Rated-R flick thinking it’s real.

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        1. MFA101

          Sometimes I wonder, as in the case of homophobia, some are actually deep in the closet.
          So for them to drop something so rude to criticize a fetish writer in the comment section of a rape fic to show off their SJW righteousness, are they actually secretly into rape or sexual violence itself? Because they clearly clicked on the link, fully knowing what it was about as I tagged explicitly.
          There are reasons I enjoy writing rape fantasies, it is therapeutic, and it lets down my insecurity as a linguistic students.
          I don't really write porn in my mother tongue or father tongue, it will be too embarrassing, and as I said before, we don't talk about sex at home with our parents. So writing in my third language is actually quite liberating. And if I gain sexual gratification from this, it is no one's business.

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          1. Could be. Could be a number of reasons aside from a religious upbringing. But they have a choice not to read, and can’t stop others from writing it. It’s a shame you have to explain your works to people who don’t understand.

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            1. MFA101

              Off topic, but I just watched some clips of Keanu's Knock Knock as you recommended the other day.
              And it IS horrible.
              How can someone do that to Keanu, someone with a face like god and a heart of gold.
              I could not finish the clip. Mr Reeves, why did you make that movie, are you really that short of money?
              I imagine John Wick killed both women with a piece of dirt. OMG.

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              1. Isn’t it?! First of all, it’s KEANU. Sweet, beautiful Keanu. I couldn’t finish it either, like you, and had to change the channel then come back to it. And what’s worse is they get away with it!!! If there was ever a time I was for vigilante justice, it was this.

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                1. MFA101

                  Keanu is my first celebrity crush, and I will carry a torch for him - and he basically looks the same from his 30s to 50s
                  Somehow I think there is a great chance that a fangirl of Adam Driver's is also a fangirl of Keanu's, because they just look so alike in some way. I read in story that Ben Solo jokingly says he is like a young, knock-off version of Keanu and it makes my howling. How accurate.

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                  1. I’ve been a Keanu fan since “Speed” with Sandy Bullock. Damn, I’m old! I’ve seen a funny gif floating around Tumblr that they are twins. At first, I was like, nuh-uh, no way they look alike. Then I saw the side by side comparison - whoa!

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                    1. MFA101

                      I think I like Reeves first before he is also part-Chinese, so I think we have something in common in a naive way. And he is really famous and well-loved in Chinese market. He is the kind of star who don't make an ass out of himself even when he is not working, or working so well. Never rude and never pull any stupid public stunt. The sad Keanue meme is just sad, he is not even aware of it. I really admire him.

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                      1. Yes, if I remember correctly, his father is Chinese and Hawiian and his mother is English. His name means “mountain breeze,” I think. He’s just a down-to-earth, low-key, kind, classy guy. He’s always had a peaceful manner and very respectful to his people in general, which is amazing in his stressful line of work.

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                        1. MFA101

                          Yes, girls have a soft spot for handsome vulnerable men who can also be a badass.
                          He has played so many "Johnny" in his films that I have decided to name my son Johnny when I was 15 or so, and I still haven't changed my mind. Well, also because Keanu is too uncommon a name.

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                          1. That’s true! Johnny Mnemonic, Johnny Utah, John Wick, even Jack (Traven) is a another nickname for John... I’ve always loved the name Johnny. And Keanu is s beautiful and unique name.

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                            1. MFA101

                              Funny thing, Keanu said he has a cousin who is also called Keanu, but before that, he had never heard about another human being called that name. And since his middle name is Charles, so he is sometimes nicknamed Charlie, and I thought, wow, that's a lovely name too. When he first came to Hollywood, the producers and agents thought his name is too uncommon, it might not be good for his career, so they asked him to change his name, and Keanu kept coming up with ridiculous stage names, and in the end, they had to give in and used his original name. I always thought Keanu is actually very smart in this way. Too bad that he is seldom recognized for his acting skills, his good looks and iconic roles alone already precede him.

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                              1. The two Keanus! That would make a cute and hilarious fic. Yes, I’ve read that too somewhere before. Wasn’t he going by “Charles Reeves” at one point? His dad’s name is also Charles. Choosing Keanu was a smart move because you can’t forget a “Keanu.” It’s true that he doesn’t get enough credit for his acting skills. I always thought he was so mesmerizing, like you couldn’t take your eyes away from him. And one hell of a martial artist!

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                                1. MFA101

                                  The moment you see his face, you will probably everything else around him, that's how beautiful he is. So I don't get why the girls get away with the crime in Knock Knock, like, how can you not fall in love with that face, (especially after having sex with him) huh? Something is wrong with the casting, Keanu is just too well-loved to be justified as a predator. They should have chosen another male lead, that would be convincing.

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                                  1. And his hair! It’s criminal. The girls in “Knock, Knock” are psychos and serial rapists. I think they went around doing this to men, seducing, harassing and blackmailing. I can never believe Keanu as a bad guy. He’s just too loveable. Like when he played that cultist creep in “Bad Batch.” I was, like, “Keanu, whaddya doin’?” Also, I love that his middle name is Charles. Charlie is a cool name.

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                                    1. MFA101

                                      Whenever actors I like take an unsavory role, you know what I worry about? Are they doing okay with their life? Are they really short of money? Do they have to take this shitty job? And this happens a lot. Sometimes I may even lost interest in some actors because they have played too many terrible roles in bad movies. But since Keanu started John Wick, it's like he had another iconic moment and everything will be okay. Then came Knock Knock... WTF
                                      But then came Destination Weddings, and I was like, wow, it would only be okay if he really ends up with Winona, I would not mind that, at all. They deserve a happy ending.

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                                      1. At this point, Keanu doesn’t need to prove himself or make anymore movies. He could retire if he wanted, but I believe he does it out of pure enjoyment. Whatever interests him without having to worry about the risk of his career being affected. So now he’s branching out and playing various characters.

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                                        1. MFA101

                                          Yes, I am glad that he is still working in the film industry even though he can do whatever he wants. And we still have more John Wicks to look forward too.

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                                          1. Can you imagine? 30+ years now in the industry. He’s not going anywhere, lol.

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                                            1. MFA101

                                              When I think about it that way, he had begun his career before I was even born, and I am still like, nah, husband material, not old at all. LOL. He will probably look the same or even better in his 60s.

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                                              1. The first movie I saw him in was Bill &Ted in ‘89, which I was 7 years old. He ages like fine wine.

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                                                1. MFA101

                                                  And I am drunk and want to swim in his pretty eyes.

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                                                  1. Lol! Don’t send for help!

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                                                    1. MFA101

                                                      I'd die in Keanu Heaven. What a way to go.

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                                                      1. Amen. I shall prepare your eulogy.

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                                                        1. MFA101

                                                          I will be rolling/dancing in my grave.

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