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  1. Does this site show you my email when I send you messages. Yep a long quality story. But hey get advice from other writers. I have the ideas but I can’t write. Or do the English grammar or create alternate sequences. I just know Skyrim mostly I will replay the game to refresh my memory

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    1. Remember a lot of minor characters aswell in your story. Such as his cousin lannisters, Tyrek, and the ones in the westerlands, And the factions in the wars to come that will revolve with the oc or come in direct conflict with him. Maybe the thing about Jamie and Cercie parenthood could’ve been kept on hold for a while bra. A surprise like 3/4 reveal of it in 3/4 of the story

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        Not with Joanna's chapters out first I can't, and that she survives Tyrion's birth ordeal. I can tell you one thing that it'll be further explain in the process. She's dead, in Westeros only. -wink wink nudge nudge-

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      Inbox, yes, but no others regarding an email being sent to my gmail or any private messages. I'd told you about my decision and conclusion but not here, sadly. Fortunately, MS Word has grammar corrections!

      I don't only play Skyrim but Oblivion too, as well as all their expansion so I might have some knowledge of their lore. It'll not only take in Skyrim, though.

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      1. Cool yeah that’s good Hey ya may Wana do several chapter about braeden POV I’m his early years. Maybe about odd dreams. Time in the dungeon, the dreams, things he knows off the back of his head he can’t explain of knowing but just happen to know them (like the legion training, boat designs), etc.... with the help of tyrion all of that was made possible. Drawings, in his head he picking up a odd language that sounds ancient beyond the language of the 1st men

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        1. A flashback chapter of his gladiator training. The coming back to life. Eventually how all this became well maybe the gods of his old world found this world and are interacting with the gods of this world or they are both playing a game by using him of fighting amongst each other. POV flashbacks with his family from the good to the bad

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          1. Like in the movie “godfather part 2”. Michq l Corleone present time and the flashback of his fathers flashback of the becoming of a gangster”. Maybe the flashback implementation will be great for the story

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          Yeah, I'm planning to make a fanfic regarding Braenden's past. However, for Braenden's dreams, it didn't happen until rather recently (which will be shown in this fanfiction).

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          1. Yeah cool still he has like 2nd hand knowledge that he is confused of how he knows this story stuff. Like in Jason Bourne he knows the tricks/skills of being a professional operative but can’t recall how he leaned it. For his past life the combat picked up faster since it feels familiar except with the new movements of gladiator skill. And knowing logistics from his Empire/or / stormcloak service.

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              I'm not sure how many crossover(s) I'll do but I know it's going to be long since it'll be many POVs on different places at once. Think of Aang's past lives from "Avatar: The Last Airbender". It works something like that. I think.

              I have always been on the Imperial side whenever I play Skyrim. Lol

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              1. The crossover is between 2 worlds. But certain logical things from other shows are okay to use. Within reason like the amnesia in Jason Bourne movie recollecting skills like your oc character. Cause I’m theory that works. Using gladiator techniques& training from Spartacus, gladiator, and maybe some pieces from Troy, or from what you learned in books. Maybe tyrion political wit you can take examples from Augustus Octavian from the show ROME. Using battle scenes and ideas from ancient and midevil movies

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                  I have some Total War titles so I may have a basic grasp of how battle works. Yes, the crossover is between one world to another, but there is not much elements I'll be using from shows/movies you mentioned even if they have great resources to refer to. I have to make my own.

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          2. Oh I found a witcher /got fanfic really bloody goood. “The white wolf of westeros”. If ya interestead in taking a look. Been adervtosing fanfics and achieveof our own stories aswelll yours included

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              I searched it and sadly I can't access FanFiction.net

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