A challenge indeed to write in the style of such a well-known author, but you pulled it off extremely well. I have to admit that I can't by any stretch of the imagination picture Charlotte herself writing this, and certainly not for publication, but who knows? The Bronte sisters were human and female like the rest of us!
Thank you! I love this novel so much that much of its language is embedded in my subconscious. I've read it so often... No, Charlotte wouldn't have written it! She wrote Jane Eyre at the age of thirty while still unmarried (and absolutely longing for love). This is actually an old story, I wrote it around 2008.