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  1. Include everything ya can bro in this story from Book and series or slight mention things. Example “brave companions was in the book not the show”. Locke Bolton’s man was in the show not the Book. Golden company,(possible Aegon, but hey plenty of time to descide if he’s legit or not based on the books). Etc..... of ya can find a way to have some adventures in Essos in the future. Or maybe this guy will have the leadership qualities and respect like ( Alexander the Great ( Collin Ferrell)) , or like Balian of Ibelin (kingdom of heaven “Orlando bloom”). Don’t bother Mel Gibson in brave heart he ain’t a savage/wild warrior like that I watch to many ancient/ midevil movie show. Use ideas from those movies I mentioned above plus (Troy, the tudors, Vikings, the last kingdom, Robin Hood (russel Crowe), gladiator, the video games. Etc....... battle scenarios, quotes, I don’t incude “lord of ring” since it doesn’t have the demeanor of a cruel world of men( no brothels, curse words, schemes, Just good vs evil.

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      Hmm... maybe. Originally, the plan was NOT to give them ANY ninjutsus and the eyes but because of Daenerys nagging about "bend the knee" thing or "be roasted by my three children" really annoys me. Like, really REALLY annoys me. And most of the fanfics I read now starts from the post-episode of S7E7 where the Starks and the Targaryens have the upper hand (I'm fine with the Starks, actually). This fanfic solely based on the Lannisters and I intend to give them something very special that could counter all those absurd "bend the knee", "be roasted by me three children" lines. Hell, this fanfic IS about Tyrion and Braenden trying to do the RIGHT thing to save Westeros from plunging into eternal chaos and winter with their blessed eyes.

      The part where you said about where the OC is a gladiator kind like Spartacus, Braenden (OC) is trained by a really, really good gladiator Ser Aren the Gladiator. Braenden is pretty much on the level of Achilles only on a different timeline, cause Medieval and Classical Antiquity (Ancient World) is VERY different. Now, the Skyrim thing and the Dragonborn, I quite like it. I may do about that but who knows? :) I never played Elder Scrolls Online, though, sadly.

      I would most like to have follow the path of the Witcher as much as I would follow the path of Dragonborn/Skyrim. The only problem is I don't know the lore of the Witcher to the contrary I know much more in Skyrim.

      Finally, I REALLY STILL DON'T KNOW WHY the both of them (Tyrion and Braenden) having the Sharingan, Rinnegan and ninjutsus are really a huge defects. Maybe it's because of the Japanese Kanji of how they say it? Like "Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku"? You know there's English translations for it, right?

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      1. Lord of ring is a good movie. But doesn’t show the portrayal of our midevil ages of men. The scheming, murders, rape, backstabbing, men with no conscious, sycophants, the racism, greed, sexism, cruelty of others for ones enjoyment. Nights are not like the ones you read in children stories. Got shows a better portrayal of our mid evil ages then lord of rings.
        GOT becomes more like lord of the rings when the battle of white walkers and the living come out in season 8.
        Ramsay Bolton is like the equivalence of that Dracula dude in mid times that put spikes up peoples asses and out their mouths like a kabab.

        You got plenty of time til your oc deals with white walkers. Your story will take a couple of years to complete.

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          It's labelled "fantasy", for a start. Back then when Tolkien wrote The Hobbit he was at the Battle of the Somme. So pretty much he was seeing the horrors of one of the greatest battle in WW1 so perhaps he wanted a better vision in his own fantasy world. From S1-S3 GoT still rocks but starting at S5 is their downfall, though I still thoroughly get amused by their writings.

          Who knows about my fanfic where it will end? GoT producers stated that they'll release the last season in 2019 and my crossover(s) will occupy the gaps this year, or Martin should release "A Winds of Winter" sooner. One can hope and wish.

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      And what is wrong with Lord of the Rings? I understand it's about "Good vs. Evil" but if you read the Silmarillion it has their own flaws that could potentially reflect the world of Ice and Fire. For an example is the character Hurin. I haven't read LotR yet but I love J.R.R Tolkien's works above anyone else. SAURON did deceived the Kings of Numenor into plunging their whole kingdom into a state of civil war.

      As for the movies, I have watched Braveheart and Kingdom of Heaven (one of my favourites) but I don't like Mel Gibson's.

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      1. Back to the ninjutsu or eyes. Whether it’s named in kanji or not. Once I see a hint of it whether ya give it a different name or not, I’ll feel the narutoness you put in it. He doesn’t have to have magic bra. He’s a capable gladiator style warrior. He can take on several incompetent lazy soldiers. Not as much with competent soldiers, Him vs Dayne could be somewhat even, Jamie he can beat as you said with sweat on his brow, He could have issues if he fought something like drogo/jon/ Dario/greyworm: barestean/ Oberyn. The oc isn’t a one man army. He can no way take on a dragon or 20 on his own let’s be realistic here

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          Well I find this rather amusing. No, he doesn't have to have magic or powers to deal with most obstacles on his way. He's a very competent gladiator-warrior type that can take on many lazy-as* knights as much as he wants to. The OC is not meant to be immortal but he is meant to be something great. I wanted HIM to be a one man army that's why the ninjutsus and the eyes for him (and Tyrion), something that reflects Indra Otsutsuki as the "Lone War God". Like I mention earlier, the OC has his flaws that will show in the coming chapters that will affect others' perspectives. The OC may look like the perfect trueborn son of Tywin and Joanna, but no. Not even Cersei, Jaime or Tyrion are.

          The problem is, with Dany b*tching around with her titles and dragons that makes her seem supreme and that many have blame House Lannisters for plunging Westeros into a very detrimental effect on the houses and people makes them want to take vengeance against the Lannisters. Since most fanfics about GoT/ASOIAF is about Starks and Targaryens, I feel like I should contribute my effort for House Lannister being the powerhouse of Westeros for a start.

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          Well, if he's to be the Last Dragonborn, why wouldn't he be taking on a dragon or twenty? ;)

          Of course you'll feel the Naruto-ness in it since it is very obvious but then again I don't see how this will ruin it. Maybe I can write chapters when they acquire the eyes and the ninjutsus from the "gods" and check them out twice.

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          1. If ya gonnna make him overpowers I rather you do dovakin case then in the future once he gets the handle of the shouts. Now if ya do naruto and people are saying wtf happened to your story. Take it out bra. Trust me once a story is tainted it starts to wither unless ya rewrite it from that point

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              I guess that might work. I'll only have to find a way to make the crossover happening. That shouldn't be hard though. :D

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              1. Cool. Yeah. That be great. Check out elder scrolls lore if ya need more info about it. The character has dreams blurry at first but yes he feels that he did come from somewhere once. He wakes up sweat dripping on his head. Seeing monster great foes etc. slowly majic will return to him. He be like a novice relearning his ways. Like the film Jason Bourne. He finally remembers all at the 3rd movie. Way later let him remember who he is not now ofcourse. Side note look up Achilles vs westeros. Look up some opinions. While I’m sure he can beat his brother Jamie. Maybe the duel will be a bit longer like 15-20 seconds. Jamie without his armor and Jamie with armor scenario. Jamie is a hell of a knight. Look up gladiator vs professional knights . Cause of one thing he’s very acrobatic. More than Oberyn. I believe he have issues if he fought Oberyn. And I’m sure Jamie vs Oberyn would be very interesting to see

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                  I have played Oblivion and Skyrim so I do know maybe somethings or more. Thanks for suggesting, though. As for the Last Dovahkiin dreams, I'll see about it how it goes. I can't confirm anything yet but it seems to be more likely than Naruto. Who knows?

                  Ser Ivan (the Gladiator) bested Ser Jaime not more than ten seconds and the OC could beat him within twenty-thirty seconds. With, or without armour. Jaime is one HELL of a knight, I agree with his prowess, but he was no matched to the very veteran and experienced master gladiator from the fighting pits of Essos. I never heard anything about Jaime being very acrobatic, less for Jaime being more acrobatic than Oberyn. I can very well say that the Gladiator and the OC is exceptionally good in taijutsu, or you can say, fighting skills with your hands and legs.

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