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  1. Bro don’t bring naruto into this story. So far it’s good. And being somewhat realistic to read of this being a believable alternate universe of GOT. If ya put ninjutsu or rinnegan whatever. You can call it gift from the old gods or whatever, several will loose taste of reading this story. Please just write it about this new OC and POV abou other characters. Make this a good quality story, not rubbish stuff. There are no good naruto/ got crossovers or even adding elements from naruto in a world like GOT. All those stories sucked in FanFiction.Net and achieveofourown.org.

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    1. I accepted. The case ya made Cercie and Jamie bastards of Aerys only known to a few in the story. I’m ok with that. But don’t pull this adding naruto factors into this. I beg you!!!!!!

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    2. Write it as how the events of GOT from what we seen or read in both the novels and HBO, will be different with the apperence of this OC. Make this something like George Martin caliber writing or close to it .

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      Thanks for reading.

      I understand what you mean about not bringing the elements from Narutoverse. At first, I find them to be very out-of-the-story if I bring them in. BUT, I have seen many fanfics where GoT/ASOIAF fanfics made crossovers with others such as Harry Potter and Lord of the Rings where they have magic and other races, though they do make perfect sense (for Lord of the Rings, in my case) to make a crossover with their fanfics. The reason why I want to add them in because, SPOILER ALERT, I want to make a crossover as well using the eyes AND ninjutsus from Narutoverse plays a very crucial role in the War of the Dawn. I'm waiting for Season 8 to see how it ends so I can alter it in this fanfic. And to my sense I don't see how this would ruin the story. Maybe you're thinking about the handseals of the ninjutsu and/or how overpowered it would be for Tyrion and Braenden (OC) to have the eyes against the world. I'll wait for your reply on this matter.

      For A+J=C+J theory, I'm not very conclusive about it but I do believe it more than Tyrion being a Targaryen. If you look up at the threads in asoiaf forum regarding that theory many inclined themselves Cersei and Jaime being Targaryens. But take not that I'm not conclusive about this.

      My fanfic is mostly going parallel on how the books and the shows goes but I take many elements from two of them as well. If there is one I am thing thing certain of, it's the drastic change when the War of the Five Kings breaks out.

      Last Edited Tue 23 Jan 2018 11:08AM EST

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      1. I understand LOrd it ring. Harry Potter I only read one or 2 good ones. But naruto o don’t feel it bra. What about other midevil shows or games, like the “witcher” video game. The OC is a reincarnated witcher but doesn’t have the tap for the power or memories yet of the abilities. Or something from elder scrolls Skyrim, or some ancient magic from Essos mentioned in the legends of westeros. Or some other midevil show/movie/game you know about that I may not be familiar with. Mention it and I’ll look it up on YouTube. But naruto I really really don’t feel it. But don’t go by me. Ask other fans. Aswell about the ther options on what they think

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          I haven't played the Witcher series yet even though I watched some walkthrough gameplays. You got one thing right, the OC is reincarnated but giving him the witcher's power or powers from "ancient magic" of Essos according to the legends of Westeros or spells from Skyrim would be no different than giving them both the Rinnegan and Sharingan. Cause I think the spells from Skyrim would be insanely more powerful and ludicrous if granted to Tyrion and Braenden, unless they have a crossover. Who knows?

          Like any other fanfics of GoT/ASOIAF, they could come up with stories how they got their powers OR how they could make a crossovers suddenly at the beginning. For example, how DRACO MALFOY wakes and find himself in WESTEROS. Giving Tyrion and the OC Braenden the eyes with a little backstory would be better to explain. I won't just suddenly give them the eyes just like that. It's not like how, "Oh, the Old Gods and the New descended upon them and granted them a great boon and blessing upon the Lannister brothers." No. Just no. I understand how this would ruin the story. I'll take into consideration.

          As for Braenden the OC, he's not a witcher to my sense. Do tell me as I am intrigued why you called him a witcher. He's more like a reincarnation of the Lich King Arthas, the Witch-King of Angmar, Attila the Hun and Genghis Khan. Even his armour has a very striking resemblance to the Black Captain (Angmar). He's not evil, no, but he has flaws that no Lannisters have in their families. Something that he took from his father Tywin.

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          1. Well anything other than naruto will do. Heck you don’t have to do a crossover on this. Events will change for sure. Things won’t play out exactly like the Book or series with him just in it. For instance. He will be tyrion champion for sure. Trying to find a way to break the betrothal to his nephew. Heck he can be something the gods sent to the heavens a “fate changer”. He has no powers but he can alter the events and certain deaths of some characters.

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              The crossover will not be Naruto, if that's what you are thinking. Yes, events will drastically change at one of the upcoming chapters soon. I won't add something how the gods intervene down into Westeros just like that. This will explain in the upcoming chapters with explanations and why the "gods" grant them the eyes (it'll be one of the unexpected character's POV).

              Is it illogical to have ninjutsus and the eyes (Sharingan and Rinnegan) to have them inside this fanfic? I'll try to find a way to replace them with factors from Skyrim or other high-fantasy medieval games. I'm not just going to remove them since they're my initial plans but like I said earlier, I'm taking into consideration when I find replacements. After all, it's not like they'll be receiving it very early. The reason why I needed them is because of one of Sasuke's Rinnegan abilities that is the portal to go to another dimensions/planets. Hence, the crossover.

              The OC will be more than just Tyrion's champion. Greater than that actually but he DOES have his bad sides that no other Lannisters have in history.

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              1. Cool yes please consider it. He’s a gladiator kind of warrior already. So I’m thinking he’s either a Spartacus (showtime) or Achilles (bad Pitt Troy) lvl warrior. If ya do a Skyrim thing, he may not be no “dragon born/dovakin” level. But can utalize certain degree magic. Like using either fire/frost or electrical spells. Forget conjugation/ healing that be to much. He has memories of a old world (maybe once was a traveling warrior in the elder scrolls world, heck even Elder scrolls online lol ) .

                If ya follow the path of the witcher (tho you said more likely not). He was someone that learned the arts of signs. But he ain’t no Gerald ofcourse. He don’t have those cat eyes. But someone with foggy memories of a past world.

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                1. Include everything ya can bro in this story from Book and series or slight mention things. Example “brave companions was in the book not the show”. Locke Bolton’s man was in the show not the Book. Golden company,(possible Aegon, but hey plenty of time to descide if he’s legit or not based on the books). Etc..... of ya can find a way to have some adventures in Essos in the future. Or maybe this guy will have the leadership qualities and respect like ( Alexander the Great ( Collin Ferrell)) , or like Balian of Ibelin (kingdom of heaven “Orlando bloom”). Don’t bother Mel Gibson in brave heart he ain’t a savage/wild warrior like that I watch to many ancient/ midevil movie show. Use ideas from those movies I mentioned above plus (Troy, the tudors, Vikings, the last kingdom, Robin Hood (russel Crowe), gladiator, the video games. Etc....... battle scenarios, quotes, I don’t incude “lord of ring” since it doesn’t have the demeanor of a cruel world of men( no brothels, curse words, schemes, Just good vs evil.

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