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Why would she call her or come to the hospital right after she just woke up without knowing she was awake?? Sometimes its really hard to read because i don't know whose talking and time changes arent always clearly marked. Also what exactly was henry in? you use the word barrel but what i conjure up isn't exactly something Emma can jump in. And i though regi and emma would be fighting more which was inferred from the summary but i like this story either way so far. Its nice to see her with Henry.
I am definitely editing my stories......but I Appreciate the time you took to comment