Black Jack is undoubtedly a monster and frankly I'm side-eyeing myself for reading fanfic about him.That being said, you captured him perfectly. I especially liked the part where he is jealous of men who don't need to do the things he needs to do to reach satisfaction. It made me think of an initiative that works with men who have pedophilic tendencies but fight to not act on them. Every "monster" is a human with a curse first. Some seem to have the strength to fight against it, others, like Jack, obviously don't - or won't.Anyway, this was a dark, strangely fascinating read!