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  1. This was incredible. The details are exquisite throughout, and I really loved your characterizations of Jun, Hei, Donny, Vivian, Donna and Jessica. But my favorite part was the "I love you" scene, especially this bit:

    “First impressions are overrated.”
    “And yet, you wear twelve thousand dollar suits.”

    So beautiful.

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    1. Aw, thank you! I really appreciate you giving me this little bit of what made the story work for you.

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