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  1. You already know my thoughts on this fic but let me write them here again just in case. Namely, "GAAAAH!!!! *squeals*"

    I was waiting for that story and it didn't disappoint. You hit the perfect scores of sexy (so sexy!), funny, sweet and in character (as usual).

    Their interactions are so comfortable and entertaining - I chuckled at ‘Actually, I was told the best was unavailable.’ and ‘You must like me.’/‘You bet I do.’ I also love how they're messing each other’s hair, that scene was just plain adorable.

    Han going to the beach wearing his full Han Costume was brilliant; got to love how he later folds everything quite neatly too!

    Ok the way Leia gets cuddly with him makes me squeal every single time; it's the familiarity and tenderness that is shown through the little things they do out of habit: "Leia scooted back so she could rest her chin on Han’s shoulder, arms sliding around his waist. She fiddled absent-mindedly with the buttons of his shirt as they kept watching the rain in silence." And later “Leia asked, hands folding together over his stomach, her lips brushing against his shoulder”. And his kissing her temple kills me every time!

    Those ‘fucking me’/'fucking you' lines?!?? HELLOOOO.

    Loved that line "She watched Han’s face come alight with wonder", and later how she just knows he’s looking at her. So sexy and sweet and lovely.

    Great ending too with "But he didn’t move."!!

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    1. AAAH THANK YOU SO MUCH FRIEND!! For commenting and encouraging along the way and for leaving a formal review, seriously ^-^ Writing their banter and cuddly-ness is my favourite thing!! FMU (f*ck me up) with the warm fluffy feels!!

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