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"That's the beauty of life," Robinton said. "One finds themselves in unexpected places with unexpected companions. When you involve boats as your means of travel--"
"--ships, sir," Menolly corrected quietly, than looked pained as it brought several sets of eyes to rest on her.
"--those unexpected places tend to be wet and salty."
"I think you may want to switch to klah, now, Master." Menolly nudged a mug of klah towards him so it was closer than the wineglass.
"What, did I forget my lines?"
Version that actually made it into Slosh:
"That's the beauty of life," Robinton said. "One finds themselves in unexpected places with unexpected companions. When you involve boats as your means of travel--"
"--ships, sir," Menolly corrected quietly, than looked pained as it brought several sets of eyes to rest on her.
"--those unexpected places tend to be more frequent in stormy weather, and safe harbors such as Half-Circle more precious and appreciated." He paused, and glanced at Menolly, noting her correction. It was the first time in a very long while he'd seen her ashamed for having--to her mind--impudently corrected him in a mistake.

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