List of Bookmarks
21 Dec 2009
Blake meets Mandy
I really liked this piece, especially the way you included so much of the song, but in more explicit detail.
I especially liked the imagery of the water sloshing out of the bathtub, like the oceans, and the way you tied the pyramids back in.
You really fleshed out Blake here and told us so much more about him, and these details will totally come to mind every time I hear the song. Really well done!