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    Harry Potter has been banged up for ten years in the hellhole brig of Azkaban for a crime he didn't commit, and his traitorous brother, the not-really-boy-who-lived, has royally messed things up. After meeting Fate and Death, Harry is given a second chance to squash Voldemort, dodge a thousand years in prison, and snatch everything his hated brother holds dear. H/Hr/LL/DG/GW.

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    5 Mar 2017

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    This story has some problems with believability, but also has much to recommend it. Despite the problems, it was still usually an engaging read, and I look forward to the next installment (currently only 33 chapters are published).

    The worldbuilding around what is possible with magic, and what a magical world with more sensible institutions would like, is quite interesting. This includes the better Quidditch rules in chapter 22, Harry’s phobia, and the Fidelius shenanigans.

    The plot developments are also surprising and clever. The political maneuverings show depth. And I like the glimpses of the darker, rarely-written-about sides of the wizarding world such as the whorehouse and the lustful ghost.

    The building of the harem is a bit unbelievable, especially in how it starts. How did Harry convince Hermione’s parents to let him tutor her in math behind closed doors for so much time? Why do all these girls like him so much after merely spending time with him, and why are they so happy about him being their “lord” in some cases? Culture could explain some cases and individual personalities could explain others, but there are too many girls for that to be a believable explanation for all of them.

    However, the characters in the harem are all different enough, and eventually have enough interesting stories of their own, that I can forgive these mistakes and still enjoy the story, though the flimsy premise is always in the back of my mind reminding me that it could have been greater.

    Another disappointing element of the story is that the AU elements are not very clear, though that hasn’t been as much of a problem in later chapters. Magical institutions were arbitrarily upgraded just to make them cooler, but only as a side note, which means I can’t predict when one of those differences could affect the plot. Albus being relatively evil is also cliché given that it isn’t the main premise of the story, though a partial explanation has been hinted at that at least ties his actions to one of the original magics of the story, so it’s mostly but not completely out-of-the-blue.

  2. Public Bookmark 33

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    The diary of one of the Ancients responsible for designing the original Stargates is discovered. Some things that were previously thought to be fundamental features of wormhole physics turn out not to be. A comedy about the importance of software testing and mass-extinction.

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    8 Jan 2017

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    A somewhat interesting account of fictional software testing. However, since I haven’t watched the show, most of the humorous references fly over my head. And I was disappointed that I didn’t get to read Sam’s reaction to the diary – not know who Sam is, I don’t understand why she would hate what it says.

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    It takes a Village to make a relationship--Or, at least, a bunch of over-reaching grumpy old farts, a military leader with a bit too much to drink, a nosy but well meaning kunoichi, eight ninken, and the power of youth. And a really cranky chakra monster with nine tails and a penchant for swearing.

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    25 Jul 2016

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    This story has some nice fluffy romance. There were some good explanations of dating and genders. But some plot inconsistencies were never addressed, such as two things at the end of the first chapter – Naruto supposedly loving Kakashi from the start, though we see she doesn’t actually, and Kurama talking to Naruto that young. There was also something else about the writing that I didn’t like, though I can’t remember now – maybe too much irrelevant filler?

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    It's droll and tacky of me to inflict yet another 'Naruto has a twin' story upon an unsuspecting world, but I did it anyway. Clearly, I'm an uncontrollable monster, and no one should pay any attention to me.

    This ninja business? It isn't for the faint of heart. Luckily Aiko is far from faint, even if she did get stuck with a ridiculously girly name.

    Definitely an OC story. A SI story depending on your definition-- her knowledge of Naruto as well as other modern things matches mine when I started the story, so I had some sort of basis for her advantages instead of doing research to give her things that would be convenient. (a la, Sure she's a chemist! Why not? She was a martial artist too, and she can build a better camera. There's none of that.). You won't ever see references to her first life: no name, family, or death. Of course, that lack of background comes with its own problems.

    This is largely the same version as what is on fanfiction.net, with the exception of materials from about chapter 70 or so on that start arcs that are noncompliant with their guidelines or lead up to those situations.

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    18 Jul 2016

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    Though this story is really long and doesn’t resolve everything (there’s a sequel), I liked it. The psychology-backed behaviors of characters was interesting, no matter that I don’t know whether it’s accurate. The main character Aiko had some interesting thoughts on the world of Naruto, too. There are more ass-kicking fights than tense fights, but the balance is close enough to make me wonder about most fights. The main character doesn’t use her past-life knowledge nearly as much as she could, but some of this can be excused as her personality, and it’s still a good story despite that. The world has a lot of details that educates what goes into a world and makes the world feel real.

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    Obito became the Jūbi Jinchūriki and consequently got smacked to oblivion and back, with words and Naruto’s fists. He died protecting the hailed boy of prophecy and his bonds, a smile on his face as he went to join Rin and Minato in the afterlife. But, it seems life has more plans for him…

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    19 May 2016

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    Obito’s characterization and thoughts about himself were interesting, and the plot of fixing the future while avoiding suspicion kept me reading. Most elements of the plot were resolved, but not all – I want to know more about Orochimaru and Itachi. Also, I didn’t understand all of the characters and references to events because I haven’t watched all of canon.

  6. Public Bookmark 58

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    Konoha's citizens are being controlled by a virus, and it falls on Sakura's shoulders to save them. A double agent among the most hostile, unrepentant criminals in the world, she finds herself navigating between competing loyalties in a sea of moral uncertainty. But that's impossible for a faithful Leaf nin like Sakura. Loyalties aren't contagious...right? [Eventual ItaSaku]

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    18 May 2016

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    The story has good characterizations of the Akatsuki, and the romance is realistic. On the negative side, the story is too vague when it time-skips, and I don’t always believe that things would stay the same for that long. While some of the foreshadowing is laughably clunky, other twists – small ones in battle and big ones about the main quest – were surprising and satisfying.

  7. Public Bookmark 81

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    She had been dating Dudley Dursley for almost six months when the topic of Cousin Harry came up the first time.

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    16 May 2016

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    A nice little story. But the plot doesn’t develop enough to be a “favorite”. I wish it had continued and showed the ending meeting and its repercussions.

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    Naruto’s friends are gone, his lover is dying, Konoha is destroyed, and Madara’s second return has pushed the entire world to the brink. Hunted and harried, Naruto is sent back in time to upend Madara’s plan before it even starts, and sets about changing everything. Butterfly effect nothing: the world is at stake, and Naruto is hardly about to let it fall to ruin once more. Not while he’s still breathing.

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    20 Jan 2016

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    A pleasant time-travel fic. Most problems with the world are resolved, but there is enough conflict to make it interesting. Cool powers and fight scenes, plus interesting details about life in Konoha, are described. I don’t personally care for the romance, but I don’t hold it against the story.

    Too often, events are described as if seen through unbelievably rose-colored glasses, and occasionally a joke is repeated multiple times. But the story was still worth reading. It held my attention through my time rereading it in January 2016, even though that was my second or third read.

    Also on FF.Net at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10224602/1/backslide. This version is supposedly uncensored.

  9. Public Bookmark 12

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    Ten short stories about Kid/Liz/Patti's relationships with their friends and family, written for 42 souls.

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    1 Dec 2015

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    Character exploration and a little bit of humor.

  10. Public Bookmark 4

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    Kid always makes everything twice as difficult for himself, and not even a desperate Liz or a terrifying Patti can stop his latest cooking obsession. KidxLizxPatti written for 42 souls.

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    1 Dec 2015

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    Character exploration.

  11. Public Bookmark 6

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    A collection of four short stories about one old house. In which there is balance, baking, ghosts, and a passing of the torch. Pairing: Liz/Kid/Patti OT3ness.

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    1 Dec 2015

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    Character exploration.

  12. Public Bookmark 4

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    Eight ficlets in response to eight prompts, all with lots of Kid/Liz/Patti goodness. Warning for poly and threesome.

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    30 Nov 2015

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    Some character exploration and humor. I don’t know enough of the background to understand it all, though.

  13. Public Bookmark 7

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    Liz still appreciates the beauty of asymmetry. Unfortunately, her partner does not... with one notable exception.

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    30 Nov 2015

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    Character exploration and humor.

  14. Public Bookmark 9

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    Kid, Liz, and Patti have a complicated relationship, especially when it comes to *intimate* matters. Here are six short stories written with tongue in cheek and mind in the gutter, about what happens when three people try to fit themselves together.

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    30 Nov 2015

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    Good character exploration and humor. I don’t completely understand Liz’s reasoning in the final chapter, but that’s only a small flaw.

    I also didn’t understand the ending of chapter 4 when I first read it. But it makes sense when I reread it after finishing the story, so that’s okay.

  15. Public Bookmark 25

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    It was inevitable, really. As soon as Kid, Liz, and Patty tried to lose their virginity: “I can’t do this! It’s not symmetrical!”

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    30 Nov 2015

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    The characters lampshade the already-apparent humor a bit too much, but the attempted solutions were creative, and the last two lines were very fitting.

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    Between the two of them is a link. He wants to start a fight with her, though he can't tell if it's to attempt to dissolve their resonating side-effect or because he may or may not have PMS.

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    28 Nov 2015

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    (Despite the tag, this is complete.)

    Nice imagery throughout, and good drama that ties things together. Good use of the bond to make romance interesting. The secondary characters all seemed true-to-life as well.

    Some parts of the story felt slow, but reading through them was worth it. I was also a bit confused by how Soul survived those 38 seconds near the end, but enough of the other methods of survival were explained that I trust there was a good reason that I just missed.

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    When God gives Hikaru his wish, he begins his journey again with a new goal in life, to prevent Sai from fading.

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    7/7
    Comments:
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    24 Aug 2015

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    More of Hikaru and Sai’s adventures, with the same flavor as the original show. Though some parts are a bit too similar to the original show, and are more like a novelization of the show. All of the character behaviors seem realistic in this new situation. The ending is left at a sort-of-cliffhanger, but the sequel clears that up, so it’s okay.

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    With another wish granted, it's Sai's turn to uptake a new journey in life with Hikaru there to help all the way.

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    35,671
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    Comments:
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    24 Aug 2015

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    A good start at continuing a good story. Will never be finished, though.

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    He cannot remember but thankfully Hikaru never forgot, not even after a decade, several dan-levels and just as many paper fans.

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    23 Aug 2015

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    A promising start, but far from finished, despite being marked “Complete”.

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    When this season's purple courgettes are woefully thin, Draco Malfoy thinks it amounts to small beans. Next thing he knows, the Department of Standards is over-run with leeks, Brussels sprouts all sorts of legislative difficulties, and somebody appears to have put a roquette under Harry Potter. Can Draco seize a marrow victory? Or will his plans for peas be squashed?

    All along, Kingsley Shacklebolt finds himself pining for the good old days, when, instead of governing, all you had to worry about were Dark Lords and imminent death,

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    1 Jul 2015

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    Some nice, simple small-scale political humor. The Harry side-story was not necessary, but enjoyable enough.

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