tip: arthur merlin words>1000 sort:hits
Another fine chapter, particularly given how busy your week has been with work and other concerns, especially those of the young Aussie variety ;) I had wondered if/when Mr. Pitezel would make an appearance and indeed he has. I'm continuing to enjoy the Sanctuary characters, as well as your original characters. Kudos to your inclusion of Penny's use of the marjoram sachet as folk remedy. I have on occasion used this essential oil myself at night, as it improves breathing and helps minimize with snoring and sleep apnea. It's also nice that you've finally gotten our girls together in the same bed, but it would be a lot better if they were getting sweaty together for reasons other than flu-related fevers. I do hope that is yet to come (pun entirely intended). Keep up the good work, as it appears that game is definitely afoot.
Posted Mon 18
Truthfully, I wanted to spend more time with Pietzel, but I realized that if I delved too far into his affairs, I would take the reader too far out of the realm where they needed to be. That had much to do with why there was such a long wait for chapter 17 - I ended up re-writing the whole thing just to focus on the H.G./Myka story.
Posted Thu 02