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  1. weepingnaiad

    WeepingNaiad

    I told you I was going to gush about this and I'm going to!

    Phil's voice, his restraint even in the face of the destruction of something so valuable to him is spot on. Perfect! And that little detail, the blood that is too red, too wet, totally unnatural, seals the deal. Because it was, but Tony and Steve were already emotionally compromised and wouldn't have caught Fury's lie.

    And then you go and have it be Clint (my heart!) as the one who found #41 for Phil. <3

    I know I've told you, but I'll tell you again. This is perfect and wonderful and makes me so happy!

    Thank you, darlin'!

    Posted Mon 28 May 2012 03:58PM EDT

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    1. hitlikehammers

      Belated, but again, lovely—THANK YOU. You know that I rather enjoy writing these two for you ;)

      Posted Tue 12 Jun 2012 09:23PM EDT

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