I love the dynamic they're developing so, so much. I really liked that this chapter had some verrrry nice little hotspots but was mostly non-bedroom interaction. I like to see that they are healthy together, partners. And the hand signals with Raven were fantastic! Such a sibling thing, and such a smart thing -- giving him a way to signal distress without alerting his hypothetically abusive dom. I love her for being determined to make sure he was all right. /hugs this fic
Thank you very much! Considering this started out as a one-off porn piece and has grown into a continuing, kind-of-episodic series, I am enjoying the non-bedroom parts a lot more than I anticipated. (Though the porn is still a lot of fun, too - I love writing porn!)
I'm so glad it's working for you, because it is kind of a different dynamic to most D/s 'verses. I hope you keep enjoying it!
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