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  1. This is some really beautiful work you've got going. I love reading your dialogue! You have a real knack for characterization, and for writing deeply emotional moments. I'm gnawing at my fingernails hoping beyond hope that John will end up with some memories of their past lives.

    "I went up for the first time as a total spaz and once we pulled free of the gravity well and I felt actual weightlessness, I think something in me changed. Now every time I go up it feels like the ship is a temple, and I'm crawling in on my knees to pray, and then the universe answers me. Enlightens me."

    Man, that section really resonated with me. Too bad I'm a little beyond choosing space travel for a career myself, huh? ;)

    Oh, and I just had to let you know "breedfester throes" and "genius-caliber idiots" had me cracking up so bad. I'm definitely going to be coming back around for updates so thank you for all your hard work so far, and keep it up! :D

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    1. Oh my GOD you wrote Upgrade, I am incredibly flattered right now!

      Thank you so much for your detailed comment! I'm glad you liked it, and I promise to keep the chapters coming. Also please let me know if there's anything you don't like, because I love being able to fix mistakes or improve things.

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