I hope this comment reaches you, because I cannot find an email address to send a message to. This was beautifully crafted; I've read a lot of fic over the eleven years I've been reading it, and this was my first Dragon Age fic. I'm certainly spoiled for anything else. This was brilliant. You gave us all the juicy, hot bits right away and the slow buildup of emotion and attachment between Zev and Alastair was a delicious ache. Small details, almost like afterthoughts, brought the mood and situations together seamlessly. Your depictions of the characters were absorbing; even your player!Warden seemed like a part of the story that was worn in and familiar. I loved all of it; please keep writing.
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Posted Sat 05 May 2012 01:14AM EDT
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