This was a wonderful remix of megyal's story. I felt like it added to her story, by filling in some of the blanks and yet you made it your own as well. Wonderful job!
Thank you! Megyal's story is lovely and gave me a warm, happy feeling to read, but I did, when thinking about how to remix it, find some places where I was curious what happened between scenes. I'm glad to hear that my story works well with hers.