"After that, I’ll break Spider-Man’s legs." Pft, yeah. You can TRY. If you want to. Only a 'girl's' damaged pride'll need to be fixed. B) This all sounded as though written by a sheltered teenage girl with a bad attitude. :| Bit of a chore to read, really. All the threats spewing out of FemDaken's head everytime 'she' talked with someone got old real fast. I'd be more wary of a mother that showed nothing on her face and who kept a level head and voice. All this anger being expressed, to me, is just screaming fear that's being covered up. Considering all the characters' accomplishments, I don't think they'd be so easily intimidated by someone they knew had to be coming and should've already been prepared for. lol This whole thing reminds me of that television show that has a mother going around trying to find her son. Weird how everyone evil is bi or gay in the mirror-verse side of things. Trying to say something?
People who can't deal with their own impotence often lash out -- this is just a version of Daken that does. As for sexualities, it doesn't matter what universe I'm writing, what alignment, whatever, I write what feels interesting at the time (and evil!Cap's harem is less a matter of anyone's sexuality than of his own control issues). And (if she could catch him and get him to hold still long enough), fem!Daken would likely have the physical strength to break Spidey's legs...if, as i said, she could actually catch him (and I don't think she could).
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