Huh! This was nice. I like your asshole!Derek, since it's vaguely hinted at that he's doing it for Stiles's own sake but he's just hilariously dysfunctional about it. It's like he literally only knows one language, and that language is VIOLENCE. Lawlz, maybe Derek spent a little too much time prowling the Bronx when he wasn't in Beacon Hills.
This was nice! I wonder whatever inspired you to write this, since it's not part of a larger series or even has more chapters upcoming, but hey! It was pretty interesting nonetheless.
I wasn't going to do anything more with this, but then I caved and Lydia started talking to me...God I sound nuts!
Well, even when I am writing arsehole Derek I still let him be a little sweet too, I can't seem to help it.
He only has one language and as I seem to be planning to write more of this I think I'll have to become proficient in VIOLENCE.
He's just tapped in the head is all. Damaged emotionally!
Thanks for the comments, as always they make me happy.
I wrote it mainly because I felt like I wasn't capturing Derek very well and I wanted to so I tried to write him like I see him on the show. So that is what I came up with.
Hahaha, no, no, you ain't nuts. I've been writing for years, so I know exactly what you're talking about.
It's called having a heart. We have a pill for that nowadays if you want to get rid of the pesky thing. ;P
Good! VIOLENCE is such a colourful language.
Mmmmm, emotional damage. Delicious.
They're my pleasure!
Ahhh, I see. Well, in your own defence, Derek seems to be merely reserved and direct by nature, not actually angry and assholish. That seems to be a coping mechanism to deal with his own feelings of guilt, grief, inadequacy and self-loathing. So it stands to reason that if he finds a healthier way to deal with all that, he won't need to be so much of an asshole. But this works, too, since it stays truer to how S2 finished.
Good, because I am so pleased i'm not the only one the characters talk to. :p
I like having my heart even if it gets kicked sometimes. Thanks for the offer I'll keep itin mind though.
The language of the emotionally crippled and the people who just need a hug.
I just kept jumping ahead in time from the end of S1 and I think if he had a pack he'd have to stop growlind and shoving people into things. Not that he has stopped shoving Stiles into things. Well this is my first attempt at straight after the end of the season becuase I have finally built up the courage to have a go at it. We'll see how it goes I have a few ideas.
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