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  1. QuinFirefrorefiddle on Chapter 2

    Oh, Spencer.

    Okay, so, before I forget- hi, Kelsey! I remember that conversation we had about her several months back, and I really like what you've done with her. She rings very true, and I like her a lot.

    The rest of the story- you know, I've only actually been on one first date myself, but yeah, this brought back memories. Loved the not-argument over paying for tea. Also the skittishness- both the PTSD kind and the rest- you portray in both of them was masterfully done. Reminded me a bit of my reaction to *those* scenes in "The Graduate" where the audience gets steadily more nervous with Dustin Hoffman. I love the moments and reasons you chose to have it set off, and the arguments they had with themselves about it.

    I also appreciate the obvious work you've done on learning Colorado Springs- I've never been to that town but I have a lot of family nearby, and all the dialogue rang true and I loved Spencer's thought about Colorado girls. :)

    Can't wait for more!

    Posted Mon 23 Jan 2012 03:32AM EST

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    1. staranise on Chapter 2

      Glasses on a bar

      Your feedback on Kelsey really made me sit up and pay attention to what I did with her. I'm glad it worked for you. :)

      HURRAH MY YEARS WITH AN ANXIETY DISORDER HAVE PAID OFF IN ART.

      Thank you so much.

      Posted Mon 23 Jan 2012 03:47AM EST

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