tip: "uchiha sasuke/uzumaki naruto" angst kudos>10
*giggles* Greed and Ling are so very mature.I love the scene where Greed reverts to Ling to make Ed show them his injury.I'm also really envious of your ability to write actio - it's really great.
*giggles* Greed and Ling are so very mature.
I love the scene where Greed reverts to Ling to make Ed show them his injury.
I'm also really envious of your ability to write actio - it's really great.
Thanks! Writing action is tough; you really have to have a clear picture of it in your head. At least I do. For complex scenes, I've been known to whip out the minis and the battle mat. Fight scenes usually mean I draft my husband to go out and choreograph a fight with foam weapons. This particular one just involved me lying around doing a lot of thinking until I had it adequately visualized; I swear, that's what took the most time of writing this.