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1. maren

   

   Awesome Cordelia, but Kate is the one who really does it for me here. You really got her reluctance and I could see her trying to hide out somewhere, but she's also not a shirker, so she doesn't put up too much of a fight when a naked woman tells her to get in a fountain at the mall.

   Baptism- nice theme.

   Posted Tue 22 Dec 2009 12:25PM EST

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2. 1. Alixtii

      

      I'm glad the story still works for you!

      Posted Mon 25 Jan 2010 01:13PM EST

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